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Post by fnyt on Jan 20, 2016 1:46:38 GMT -5
Hello again, few weeks ago I've posted my first GD level ( link) and got it reviewed fairly quick, thanks for that. I've received a bit of criticism, so I've decided to redo something here and there to hopefully make it better. Author: Fnyt Name: Chaoz Fantasy LevelID: 15678139 How I've redone the level: - some parts have been completely changed, - other parts have been fixed/slightly changed, - the rest was left the way they've been I may have probably focused a bit too much on the difficulty, therefore I've fixed the moving parts/pure memorization stuff to make the level look better (hopefully) at a cost of it being easier.
Preview of the version two:
I hope the redoing didn't make it worse. Any feedback appreciated. If it'll land somewhere else than "needs improvement" I can say the remake was a success, but if it's still not good enough I guess I'll just let it be this way and improve myself by making more levels. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2016 4:08:58 GMT -5
This is way better than the original. There's some things you need to work on future though. For example, at 0:39, you could add other blocks WITH the brick blocks, instead of only adding the bricks. At 1:10, the level is very empty. You should try many different decoration styles at parts like those, and see what looks the best. At 1:23, you should have put blocks/structures that have nothing to do with gameplay (it makes it look way better), and make the decoration less repetitive (delete some stars and add other deco, or make stars with different sizes and shades). There is more, but you should start making new levels and keep experiencing with the editor. By the way this is not a review, just some ideas how you could improve your level. This is a good start for you  |
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Post by fnyt on Jan 21, 2016 18:08:33 GMT -5
This is way better than the original. There's some things you need to work on future though. For example, at 0:39, you could add other blocks WITH the brick blocks, instead of only adding the bricks. At 1:10, the level is very empty. You should try many different decoration styles at parts like those, and see what looks the best. At 1:23, you should have put blocks/structures that have nothing to do with gameplay (it makes it look way better), and make the decoration less repetitive (delete some stars and add other deco, or make stars with different sizes and shades). There is more, but you should start making new levels and keep experiencing with the editor. By the way this is not a review, just some ideas how you could improve your level. This is a good start for you Cheers for the feedback, I won't do a second remake, although I may fix a few things here and there it if won't take long. I'm looking forward to an actual review. And definitely, I will make more levels, already got some quite unique ideas, one of them would involve my own music piece as a soundtrack. |
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Post by milesman34 on Jan 29, 2016 21:01:29 GMT -5
Gameplay: 1.5/3.5 The gameplay has improved, but there are still a lot of annoying teleportation portals, areas where you can't see what is coming, and moving objects. Decor/Design: 1.5/3.5 It has improved but still feels empty in some places. Music Sync: 1/1.5 Decent sync, similar to the first version. Originality: 0/1.5 It's a v2 so yeah. Total: 4/10 Lower Decent. I advise you to use better gameplay and decorations in your next level. Difficulty:  8  |
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