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Post by fnyt on Jan 9, 2016 5:37:57 GMT -5
Hello everyone, I'm kinda new the forum itself, but I've been recently working really hard on my first GD level (hopefully to be judged demon) and finally got it finished. This is one of the first versions and it may change in future. Do you enjoy it, should I make more? Level ID: 15678139 Author: Fnyt (me) Screenshots: imgur.com/NGjF0F5 imgur.com/Bbjf4Zs imgur.com/sWGs2wG imgur.com/KZxbvjF imgur.com/dKffE8L imgur.com/Hb0GGMC UPDATE: Link to the second version topic [HERE]. |
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Post by milesman34 on Jan 9, 2016 11:49:34 GMT -5
Gameplay: 1/3.5 Not good gameplay. The moving objects are very annoying and there is some memorization. Also the part that forces you to memorize the room is not a good part. Decor/Design: 0.5/3.5 The decoration is poor, with either a lag of decor or severe color clashes. Sync: 1/1.5 This is actually a lot better than the gameplay Originality: 1/1.5 Some of the gameplay parts are original. Total: 3.5/10 Needs Improvement or Decent. Really annoying gameplay and the decor isn't that good. Difficulty:  9  |
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Post by fnyt on Jan 9, 2016 13:05:45 GMT -5
Gameplay: 1/3.5 Not good gameplay. The moving objects are very annoying and there is some memorization. Also the part that forces you to memorize the room is not a good part. Decor/Design: 0.5/3.5 The decoration is poor, with either a lag of decor or severe color clashes. Sync: 1/1.5 This is actually a lot better than the gameplay Originality: 1/1.5 Some of the gameplay parts are original. Total: 3.5/10 Needs Improvement or Decent. Really annoying gameplay and the decor isn't that good. Difficulty: 9 Thanks for the review! It's my very first level, I wasn't expecting it to be good. On a sidenote, while making this level I was focusing on making it original and difficult, also I do not particularly like the decoration-stuffed style unlike many others. I'm still wondering, any specifing moving-objects parts got you annoyed or just all of them in overall? |
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Post by milesman34 on Jan 9, 2016 13:49:42 GMT -5
Gameplay: 1/3.5 Not good gameplay. The moving objects are very annoying and there is some memorization. Also the part that forces you to memorize the room is not a good part. Decor/Design: 0.5/3.5 The decoration is poor, with either a lag of decor or severe color clashes. Sync: 1/1.5 This is actually a lot better than the gameplay Originality: 1/1.5 Some of the gameplay parts are original. Total: 3.5/10 Needs Improvement or Decent. Really annoying gameplay and the decor isn't that good. Difficulty: 9 Thanks for the review! It's my very first level, I wasn't expecting it to be good. On a sidenote, while making this level I was focusing on making it original and difficult, also I do not particularly like the decoration-stuffed style unlike many others. I'm still wondering, any specifing moving-objects parts got you annoyed or just all of them in overall? The parts that require memorization and have no indicators of what is coming |
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Post by fnyt on Jan 9, 2016 14:25:59 GMT -5
Thanks for the review! It's my very first level, I wasn't expecting it to be good. On a sidenote, while making this level I was focusing on making it original and difficult, also I do not particularly like the decoration-stuffed style unlike many others. I'm still wondering, any specifing moving-objects parts got you annoyed or just all of them in overall? The parts that require memorization and have no indicators of what is coming I see, I'll consider fixing them, although I'd rather wait for other possible reviews before doing so, thanks for the effort mate. |
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Post by Mechanguis on Jan 9, 2016 21:33:56 GMT -5
Gameplay: 1/3.5 Not good gameplay. The moving objects are very annoying and there is some memorization. Also the part that forces you to memorize the room is not a good part. Decor/Design: 0.5/3.5 The decoration is poor, with either a lag of decor or severe color clashes. Sync: 1/1.5 This is actually a lot better than the gameplay Originality: 1/1.5 Some of the gameplay parts are original. Total: 3.5/10 Needs Improvement or Decent. Really annoying gameplay and the decor isn't that good. Difficulty: 9 Approved. Moved to Needs Improvement.
Also, even though the level doesn't need to be decoration-stuffed, I still think the colors and the sawblade + block placement and organization could've been better. fnyt |
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Post by fnyt on Jan 10, 2016 2:58:19 GMT -5
Gameplay: 1/3.5 Not good gameplay. The moving objects are very annoying and there is some memorization. Also the part that forces you to memorize the room is not a good part. Decor/Design: 0.5/3.5 The decoration is poor, with either a lag of decor or severe color clashes. Sync: 1/1.5 This is actually a lot better than the gameplay Originality: 1/1.5 Some of the gameplay parts are original. Total: 3.5/10 Needs Improvement or Decent. Really annoying gameplay and the decor isn't that good. Difficulty: 9 Approved. Moved to Needs Improvement.
Also, even though the level doesn't need to be decoration-stuffed, I still think the colors and the sawblade + block placement and organization could've been better. fnyt Any specific parts that I should fix, or should I just consider redoing the whole level? I hope that there are at least a few parts that look just fine and don't need redoing. Can you please place any details/suggestions of what should I focus on and how to make it better? Any feedback would be appreciated, because this is kinda my first level done and I'd love them to be at least playable. I'll try to get down to fixing it then as soon as I get my uni exams and stuff done. EDIT: Also, if I improve it, should I post a vid of next version in this thread, or make a new one? |
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Post by fnyt on Jan 13, 2016 17:58:09 GMT -5
UPDATE: I've started working on fixing the level, I guess it should be done by the next 2 weeks (gonna be kinda busy nowadays). Hopefully it will be better than the first version, would be nice to get another review once it's done. Also, I could try doing some sneak peeks to see if it is going good way.
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Post by fnyt on Jan 19, 2016 18:45:40 GMT -5
UPDATE: Version two is out, I've edited the main post.
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Post by ~Pear~ on Jan 19, 2016 19:50:48 GMT -5
UPDATE: Version two is out, I've edited the main post. if you have made v2 please post in level suggestions |
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