416 posts
Creator Points: 4
Favorite Level: Stereophonic System - GDSpeed
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Post by TheTrueEclipse on Nov 30, 2015 13:30:31 GMT -5
My friends first level Collab with GDNoname.
ID 14309635
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416 posts
Creator Points: 4
Favorite Level: Stereophonic System - GDSpeed
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Post by TheTrueEclipse on Dec 1, 2015 6:39:09 GMT -5
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182 posts
Discord: Fabman650#6828
Clans: Geometry Dash League
Creator Points: 2
Favorite Level: idk i really like'd old site in celeste
Hardest Demon: idk i can be pretty difficult sometimes
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Post by Fabby on Dec 1, 2015 14:52:58 GMT -5
Gonna be rating a lot of levels today, so get ready ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Design: (4/10) For me, the design was very repetitive in some parts. For a fair portion of the level, the whole thing was a plain timeset covered in copy-paste circles. However, some parts of the level has decent design (e.g first robot part and rainbow ufo looked pretty decent), but the rest of the level looks fairly bland and plain in terms of design. Perhaps you should focus on adding more coll effects to the level and avoid copy-pasting the same aspects of a level and adding scale. Music Sync: (7/10) I really enjoyed the song choice, and sync was pretty decent. Slightly off in some places, but overall it was pretty good. To improve, perhaps you could add your own custom lines to a level to give more of an idea on where to put certail triggers or portals. Gameplay: (6/10) I enjoyed the gameplay in many parts of the level, but the first robot part was slightly unfair as it gave you VERY little time to react (a good example would be the three block jumps only STARTING to appear at the moment you had to jump, and so that required a bit of memory to bypass easily), and I couldn't quite understand why you used that moving object during the first wave part (It made that part look incredibly ugly and had no purpose at all during the level). other than that, gameplay was pretty cool and challenging. Probably 6* difficulty. Overall: (5.5/10) Rating: Decent Levels Final Thoughts: This level wasn't good, but it wasn't that bad either. I enjoyed a lot of the gameplay, but the design as well as the use of moving objects was VERY weak and unnecessary in many parts of the level. Design wasn't great, except for one or two parts. A lot of talent was wasted in this level, in my opinion. I know you can do better. Suggestions: To improve, I'd suggest looking at other creator's levels, maybe Viprin or ASonicMen. Take inspiration from their levels and use their ideas to make your own beautiful creations. If you're not sure how to make certain aspects of a level, or want to see how your ideas work or simply what to see how they look, make test levels and use them to help you when you make a big level. That can help you improve massively. /summon megaman9 -Fapman REVIEW APPROVED: Cheeseman
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416 posts
Creator Points: 4
Favorite Level: Stereophonic System - GDSpeed
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Post by TheTrueEclipse on Dec 2, 2015 6:41:01 GMT -5
This is a collab BTW so part of it wasn't his fault.
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416 posts
Creator Points: 4
Favorite Level: Stereophonic System - GDSpeed
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Post by TheTrueEclipse on Dec 2, 2015 6:41:59 GMT -5
ANd it's not my level but I'll tell him
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Post by Cheeseman on Dec 17, 2015 12:15:13 GMT -5
Nice review FabbyApproved and moved.
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