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Favorite Level: Mystery Dungeon; Lonely Travel
Hardest Demon: Deadlocked
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Post by Omikron on Nov 27, 2015 14:49:45 GMT -5
Hello! I made my second level and I would like it to be judged. Its name is "Color adventure". Now I understand most things in level editor, I used some dissapearing and moving objects. It was really hard for me to verify. ID: 14298343 There is small bug at the end (you can still complete the level, just if you jump up at the end of ball part to the ceiling, you won't see ending text. I fixed that already but I have to verify the level again to update it and it can take me some time...). Good luck!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2015 15:21:19 GMT -5
Hmm, lets see here. The beginning has nice gameplay; you know what's going to appear and disappear. There's that one 'rainbow road' place, I think you should get rid of that and make the death more direct. There's quite a lot of bugs too. Timings are weird and sometimes you will hit something and die inevitably. Then comes the dreaded 'Color Madness.' In this place, almost no colors match. Literally no decoration appears except for some exclamation points and stars. Toggle triggers are extremely overused, with those purple and brown markers appearing almost everywhere. There are quite a few problems with this level, most noticeable is the lack of decoration. The level seems bland, with only small pulsing objects and spinning glow decor here and there. Color choice could also be improved. Background and Ground colors don't match nicely throughout the entire level, and colors don't use any kind of opacity or blending. Gameplay gets kind of annoying: Toggle is used too much, and don't forget those rainbow transformers. And what's with "Don't trust the rainbow"? 2/10? I dunno... megaman9 EDIT BY CHEESEMAN: Review approved. Moving to "Needs Improvement"
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Favorite Level: Mystery Dungeon; Lonely Travel
Hardest Demon: Deadlocked
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Post by Omikron on Nov 27, 2015 16:29:14 GMT -5
Thank you for quick reply! I named the level Color Adventure so I thought that I should change colors at some point. But maybe doing it chaotic wasn't a good choice. "Don't trust the rainbow" is just random sentence which came to my mind while making this level "There's quite a lot of bugs too. Timings are weird and sometimes you will hit something and die inevitably." - what do you mean by weird timings? Aren't the timings unpredictable in demon levels and that's why they are so hard? So why some hard to pass places are bad? "Toggle is used too much" - I made that so the level at the end is still hard. I've seen some demon levels (I haven't completed, but watched other people completing) which have appearing blocks with no warning. At least I gave warning because you know which block is special.
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Post by Cheeseman on Dec 10, 2015 12:46:36 GMT -5
Approved @dceoprg 's review. Moved.
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