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Post by skylighter on Nov 17, 2015 0:00:48 GMT -5
Note: This was the first level that I've created. Made in 1.9.
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Post by Cheeseman on Nov 25, 2015 11:05:17 GMT -5
I'm not the judge you'd want to review your first level, but here goes.
Design - 0.3/2.5 I think you were probably expecting for your level to me marked down on the design, and that's exactly what's happening. This was made in 1.9, so I know certain things weren't available to you, but it's not a particularly pretty level. There wasn't a single thing I liked about the design, and the only reason you actually got scored is because there were some sections that actually look somewhat OK. You'll pick up on level design over time, I'm sure.
Decoration - 0.4/2 Decoration is a bit better than the design, not because it's better looking, but because you have actually done some decoration, which is something quite a lot of people do not do on their first time making levels. The quality of the decoration is really rather poor, though.
Gameplay - 3.4/4.5 If there is one thing that most new level creators get better than some of the big, well-known creators, it's gameplay. Loads of different vehicles, consistent difficulty, no long pauses of inactivity, the design and decoration hasn't been prioritised over it and caused hinderance to the gameplay, no nasty movements or transitions (mainly because this is 1.9) etc. If I do have one complaint, it's the serious overusage of copy and paste, knocking you down just over a point. Be careful with that feature, you don't want your levels getting too repetitive.
Music Synching - 0.7/1 Overall this is fine, but there are some portal changes and some other features that are off sync.
Creativity - x1 Nothing bad, noting special.
Bad/Good Things - x0.9 There are a lot of noobish mistakes made throughout the entire level. Some of these are: single block spam, random colour changing in the background, missing lines, missing corner pieces... Just make sure the level always looks polished.
OVERALL - 4.3/10 (Needs Improvement) It's perfectly normal for your first time round to end up with a low score. Great job on the gameplay, but the design and decoration is in a sorry state.
PLUS: All reviews from now on will use a slightly updated formula.
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Post by WillFlame on Nov 30, 2015 18:00:46 GMT -5
Approved. I liked the level's music/gameplay sync a lot, for some reason.
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Post by Rustam on Dec 27, 2015 14:59:00 GMT -5
Design[0/2.5] Very weird block usage and color combination! There were just some blocks flying around sometimes and sometimes blocks were even missing,not well done! Gameplay[4/4] The Gameplay however looks very good and fun to play! Good job! Decoration[0/2.5] Like I said before the color combination is not very good and you didn't decorate the level that well,it just doesn't look very good! Music Sync[1/1] The music sync was perfect I loved it! It went with the gameplay as well,good job! Overall[50%/Decent Level]
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Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2015 16:52:04 GMT -5
Reviewed twice
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Post by M i 7 4 on Jan 8, 2016 13:55:32 GMT -5
I have a feeling this would be easily featured in 1.9
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Post by skylighter on Jan 29, 2016 21:11:35 GMT -5
I have a feeling this would be easily featured in 1.9 Probably early 1.9.
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