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Post by Gmd Tony115 on Nov 10, 2015 22:27:22 GMT -5
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WillFlame
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Post by WillFlame on Nov 11, 2015 18:02:50 GMT -5
Yey, doing another review.  Gameplay: Although this area was done decently, there is some room for improvement. You may want to lower the amount of teleportation portals and moving blocks, since those are usually really annoying to play around and are confusing (0:39). However, I do see that you've tried to combat the issue by making some sections have an auto intro, like at 0:23. This is not ideal, but if you want to keep those teleportation portals, it's probably the best thing you could do. The difficulty of the level also spikes at the triple-speed wave (including the mini wave), which seems too challenging compared to the rest of the level. But overall, nicely done! (8.5/10)
Decoration: Your pitfall here was the lack of variety. The swirling orange decorations and stars, as well as the brick blocks, were used for most of the level. This quickly gets boring, and it seems as if you've started a beautiful level, then ran out of ideas. It also looks like a whole lot of copy/paste, which detracts from the overall beauty of the level. It isn't a simple problem to solve, and will require lots more effort and time. Remember: even if you want it to look like it's following a theme, there are plenty of blocks out there (like perhaps the industrial-themed ones) that you can use to full extent. (6/10)Technical: Music sync was good, although there were a couple sections that seemed a little random and detached (0:12). As a next step, try syncing the gameplay to the music as well. I can see you tried in some areas, especially the cube and wave sections, but don't forget about everywhere else! Colours were another large problem. You want to make sure there are at least three contrasting colours in a section- both the blocks and the decor (0:05). You also don't want your colours to be too saturated, otherwise they look out of place and messy (like at the wave part). These are simple fixes that will greatly enhance your level. (7/10)TOTAL: (7.2/10)- Decent Levels /summon Rustam Geometry Dash Chaoz megaman9 |
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