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Post by Gmd Tony115 on Nov 5, 2015 20:45:23 GMT -5
Level Name: Flare
Desc: Excitment
ID: 13445079
Rate: 6-7 Stars Harder
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Post by Gmd Tony115 on Nov 6, 2015 20:48:06 GMT -5
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Post by . on Nov 7, 2015 12:43:34 GMT -5
Design: 3/3 Awesome design!
Deco: 0.95/2,Way to much fire deco on the background.
Sync: 1/1 Perfect!
Gameplay: 2/2 awesome! Level placement: 1.50/2, a weird teleportation on 0:29 of the video, the previous part without ground can be seen.
7.51/10, a feature worthy level. Good work! This is my first review, so I might have mistakes.
/summon megaman9
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Post by Gmd Tony115 on Nov 7, 2015 17:15:13 GMT -5
Ye, I don't have any idea for the teleporting part. I just put something random
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Post by Gmd Tony115 on Nov 7, 2015 17:47:55 GMT -5
Design: 3/3 Awesome design! Deco: 0.95/2,Way to much fire deco on the background. Sync: 1/1 Perfect! Gameplay: 2/2 awesome! Level placement: 1.50/2, a weird teleportation on 0:29 of the video, the previous part without ground can be seen. 7.51/10, a feature worthy level. Good work! This is my first review, so I might have mistakes. /summon megaman9 Oh yeah about the deco, It was one of voop'is rules, that the theme would depend on the Desc, which gave me a new Desc which was fiery, Also I have just updated it. |
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Post by Cinereal on Nov 7, 2015 18:20:07 GMT -5
Gameplay: The teleports were pretty random and unexpected in some places, and that each section looked pretty basic; there wasn't much happening inside each one. Also there wasn't any corner blocks that fill in the sliding blocks which people find annoying. The timing at 12% wasn't the best; you should've extended that part until the music switched stages and finally, the amount of moving blocks was quite scarce as well. Also it looked like you were desperate to finish the level, considering it's only 1:03 long. However, the gameplay isn't the worst, this could possibly be featured if the decoration was more varied.
Decoration: The problem is that you used the same decoration throughout the whole level which really bugs me, because it just looks really lazy copy and pasting stars and swirly objects; not even trying to make them look neat. Another thing that looks the same throughout the whole level are the blocks used, they were just a dull grey and they didn't really look appealing.
Overall: To make your level look more star-rated / featured towards gameplay, I would suggest fixing the teleports so they aren't unexpected, add some more action in the Ship / UFO sections, add corner blocks to all sliding blocks, sort out the timing at 12%, add more moving blocks towards the end and possibly extend? And for decoration, I would suggest you should vary the objects instead of using the same two and make your blocks more colorful and not gray and dull.
Gameplay: 6 / 10
Decoration 4 / 10
Total: 10 / 20
"Good level but wouldn't agree with it being featured, and could possibly be star-rated if the level was updated with ideas I've mentioned."
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Post by Mechanguis on Nov 7, 2015 22:22:58 GMT -5
Gameplay - There's way too many unexpected teleportation portals that it gets a bit frustrating after a while. Other than that, the gameplay is decent, but not noteworthy. 2/4 Decorations - It's mostly just the same decorations and blocks that are used throughout the level. Try to vary the blocks more and decorations more. Don't copy-paste the same decorations over and over in each area. You also need to add corner pieces to the slopes so they won't look chopped off. Finally, in some of the transitions, you can see some unfilled areas. Those parts need fixing. 1/3 Music Sync - The transitions are alright but the cube, ball, and robot parts could do better. 1/2 Personal Opinion - It's an ok level, but the copy-paste and teleports are just too much. -1 Overall - 3/10. Avoid copy=pasting things too much and vary the design more. There also needs to be less unexpected teleports. Finally, you need to fill in the transitions and add corner pieces. Overall Score - 5.17/10. Either Decent/Needs Improvement. /summon megaman9 |
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Post by megaman9 on Nov 8, 2015 8:50:11 GMT -5
Cinereal You're a level judge. Level judges can move stuff XD
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Post by ~Pear~ on Nov 8, 2015 12:29:51 GMT -5
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