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Discord: EnK_#0420
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Hardest Demon: Windy Landscape
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Post by Dreamzy/zi8tx/EnK_ on Oct 23, 2015 17:59:22 GMT -5
Ayyy, sorry for having no video If you could, make a gameplay and a review for it I took my bare time i had this whole week to make this level, so yeah. ID: 13353074
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Post by Viceroy on Oct 24, 2015 12:36:59 GMT -5
Playthrough notes: Beginning transition is choppy. I'd make it black at the start. UFO part moving blocks are annoying. They also lack object lines. Deco overlaps. Underdecorated. White flashes don't fit with the green hexagons much. Green water-stuff is odd and unnecessary. Wave part is boring. Flashy sawblades don't fit much. I like the diamonds in the ship part, but the red background is odd. There are small empty lines in the diamonds too. Invisible saws have a blue object line, doesnt fit well. Blue blocks don't fit well. Again, ball part has funky colors. Some bugs here. The moving blocks move too quickly imo. The deco also overlaps them. Rainbow robot is too rainbow. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) The UFO part has funky colors. (noticing a theme here) Why is this wave part auto? Next UFO part suffers the same problems. Funky colors, little deco. Cube part colors are weird, and some block design is odd ESPECIALLY the water thingies. This ufo suffers the same problems as the other UFO parts. Also, it seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the level. Last ship part effects are okay, I guess. Final straight fly is a bit hard compared to the rest of the level. Still lacks deco. Overall: 4/10 I might seem harsh, but criticism is what you need to improve. Try watching tutorials on youtube, and copying famous creator's levels to see how they do things. (don't copy it exactly though!) Good luck. megaman9 Decent Levels or Needs Improvement. Your choice.
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