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Post by lunarize on Oct 2, 2015 7:46:22 GMT -5
Ay found this site and decided to try my luck xD
Name: Luminescence
ID: 12024394
Song: Whirlwind by Jumper
Was an unfinished 1.9 level, 2.0 came at the ball part
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Post by benjaminstrike on Oct 3, 2015 18:10:52 GMT -5
Looks great! But I have some remarks:
The beginning of the level is not well synced with the music and the stars are too unclear to be seen well, which is very annoying. Try to make the background a bit darker. At the last sunset part there is not a lot of gameplay involved maybe try to add some obstacles.
Rating: 7/10
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Post by Cheeseman on Oct 3, 2015 19:01:12 GMT -5
I'd already played this and completely forgot to review it. Whoops :/ THE GOOD BITS- Looks fantastic
- Heaped piles of design variation(*)
- Good syncing with music
- Plenty of different vechiles
THE NOT-SO-GOOD BITS
- Not a fan of the "stars" being obstacles. They are had to see and not the most suitable of obstacles, especially with the bright background and flashes
- The first UFO section belongs in a far harder level
- The other UFO section I am not a fan of. I have no clue where to go until it is far too late
- The mini-wave portal is placed badly. There is no point in making it bigger if you have to go through the very top in order for you to successfully get through it.
- I don't like how the level enters a sunset theme and become 10 times easier at the very end
- (*)The design varies so much it seems as if every section belongs in a different level
I wouldn't call this a level. It seems like a mish-mash of sections from different levels with different designs and even different difficulties. I don't like it becuase of this. There are even some very minor and fixable flaws. It just great to look at, and that's it really. Stars and feature for the looks, but nothing for everything else. 5/10
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Post by lunarize on Oct 3, 2015 23:15:41 GMT -5
Okay, thanks for the feedback. I made a small update to the level 1. Changed stars to simply gears 2. Nerfed 1st UFO part and enlarged invisible platforms to help 3. Made 2nd UFO part more visible by changing other blocks to light green 4. Honestly, i dont really know what to do with the sunset part, all i did was add some obstacles so that you cant touch the houses or the ceiling 5. Moved and scaled the mini and normal wave platforms If it won't take up much of your time, mind having a look at the level again? Thanks  |
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Post by lunarize on Oct 3, 2015 23:16:01 GMT -5
oh and i gave the level a little bit of theme too xD
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Post by Cheeseman on Oct 4, 2015 9:02:41 GMT -5
I've played it again and it is much improved. Personally I would have left the decoration stars in at the beginning, but it is far easier to work out where you are going now. The same applies to the second UFO section (I think I spotted one of the rectangles had a bit of rainbow missing, you might want to check that). The size change portals in the wave are far better now. It still seems like a bit of a mish-mash though, but I think this is at least worthy of stars now. Scored bumped up to 7.5/10
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