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Post by JawDash on Oct 1, 2015 13:56:47 GMT -5
Hey guys, please could you look at my level XenoGenesis Temple? It would be greatly appreciated if it got a star rating, thank! ID:11804760
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Post by M i 7 4 on Oct 1, 2015 14:12:47 GMT -5
That name lel xD First off, your level lack ALOT in detail, I possibly think you are a new creator, next is music sync, try making your levels sync in with the music, it will make it much better to play. And you level isn't very aesthetically pleasing too. Try changing color match because brown,purple,red an yellow just don' go. The gameplay is pretty smooth but alot of the parts could be done very easily. I think Easy level. Overall I give you a 2.10 /summon megaman9
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Post by JawDash on Oct 1, 2015 14:19:30 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback, the music dosent sync because i copied one of my older levels and added onto it and changed the music. Welp, i will start working on a new level soon.
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Post by JawDash on Oct 1, 2015 14:21:46 GMT -5
Also, to you and anyone else, what song should I use in the new level i will be making?
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Post by Cheeseman on Oct 2, 2015 10:48:04 GMT -5
I'll drop a review, not that there is much to say and really this isn't what you should be focusing on. I do level reviews considering that the creator has a pretty reasonable knowledge on how to make a level and knows the basics. I am not sure about that, so I will recommend something after the review that I highly urge you to look into if you plan on making further levels in the future. THE GOOD BITS- As you are a novice to level creation, this is pretty good
- You made the level, not a copy. I applaud you for that
THE BAD BITS (IT'S THE 3 MAIN AREAS)
- Bad decoration
- Bad music syncing
- Bad gameplay
It's a 1/10, but for a novice it's reasonable. You are a way off of becoming a good creator deserving of recognition, but you are on the right track. What I highly recommend you do is watch as many YouTube videos you can on level building. There are hundreds, if not thousands, of level creation videos out there, some focusing on the basics and others on more intricate decoration, which you shouldn't be focusing on quite yet. If you prefer to read, I am highly certain that there are multiple things on forums, including this one, and other websites filled with information on how to make an enjoyable, great level. On top of this, don't feel ashamed to copy good creators' levels if possible. This isn't so you can copy the level, take bits, and publish it yourself, but more for the reason of seeing how these people have managed to create such wonderful levels. You see a feature you like, so you copy that level and see how it's made so you can understand how to apply it or something similar to your level. That's my rant over, happy creating
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Post by JawDash on Oct 3, 2015 5:44:26 GMT -5
OK, thanks for the review!
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Post by Invader on Oct 3, 2015 23:40:34 GMT -5
Don't worry JawDash! You'll get better
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Post by Person on Oct 6, 2015 21:28:11 GMT -5
OK, thanks for the review! Also, with those other created levels? Look at what they did, but don't just copy off of them. Learn what appeals to you, because if it doesn't seem good to you, it probably won't seem good to anyone else. Be original!
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