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Post by GrenAde on Sept 30, 2015 17:25:57 GMT -5
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Post by Cheeseman on Oct 2, 2015 10:30:14 GMT -5
Here's a quick review from me: THE GOOD BITS- Some of the level decoration is fantastic, mainly towards the beginning (first cube, wave and UFO)
THE BAD BITS
- Poor usage of moving objects at the start. You should see the coming, not land on them just as they finish coming up
- The wave section is pointless. There's almost nothing to do
- The UFO section is pointless. There's almost nothing to do
- Other long periods of nothing
- The block section has a long period where nothing happens
- The majority of transitions between vehicles are invisible and there is nothing to indicate their existence
- The level ends where the song gets good completely unsynced with the music
- Music syncing with level in a lot of areas is barely there
If this level was as well decorated as the beginning two sections and had the gameplay factor of the first flying section, this would be a borderline masterpiece. Unfortunately there are so many major things wrong with it. Mainly needs serious gameplay changes, and decoration could be touched up here and there. 2/10
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Post by GrenAde on Oct 4, 2015 19:32:58 GMT -5
Here's a quick review from me: THE GOOD BITS- Some of the level decoration is fantastic, mainly towards the beginning (first cube, wave and UFO)
THE BAD BITS
- Poor usage of moving objects at the start. You should see the coming, not land on them just as they finish coming up
- The wave section is pointless. There's almost nothing to do
- The UFO section is pointless. There's almost nothing to do
- Other long periods of nothing
- The block section has a long period where nothing happens
- The majority of transitions between vehicles are invisible and there is nothing to indicate their existence
- The level ends where the song gets good completely unsynced with the music
- Music syncing with level in a lot of areas is barely there
If this level was as well decorated as the beginning two sections and had the gameplay factor of the first flying section, this would be a borderline masterpiece. Unfortunately there are so many major things wrong with it. Mainly needs serious gameplay changes, and decoration could be touched up here and there. 2/10
Thanks for the tips. I focused more on appearance than gameplay Im going to try to use some of these tips in my upcoming level
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Post by is this memes? on Oct 16, 2015 18:21:41 GMT -5
trying too hard to be Unity by TriAxis and FunnyGame
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Post by VegetarianBacon on Oct 17, 2015 17:03:32 GMT -5
Here's a quick review from me: THE GOOD BITS- Some of the level decoration is fantastic, mainly towards the beginning (first cube, wave and UFO)
THE BAD BITS
- Poor usage of moving objects at the start. You should see the coming, not land on them just as they finish coming up
- The wave section is pointless. There's almost nothing to do
- The UFO section is pointless. There's almost nothing to do
- Other long periods of nothing
- The block section has a long period where nothing happens
- The majority of transitions between vehicles are invisible and there is nothing to indicate their existence
- The level ends where the song gets good completely unsynced with the music
- Music syncing with level in a lot of areas is barely there
If this level was as well decorated as the beginning two sections and had the gameplay factor of the first flying section, this would be a borderline masterpiece. Unfortunately there are so many major things wrong with it. Mainly needs serious gameplay changes, and decoration could be touched up here and there. 2/10
This level doesn't deserve a 2/10. You are too harsh. I like the simplistic design. The moving blocks in the beginning is good. I do not think the wave and the UFO parts are pointless. I think they are what make the level unique. The music syncing is pretty good. I do agree that there should be something that lets you know what gamemode you are going into. Overall, I give this a 8.7
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Post by Nargo on Oct 29, 2015 20:30:32 GMT -5
Everyone's a critic. I love the decoration, and the moving blocks. The music sync was good 70% of the time. This level is gorgeous.
9.6/10
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Post by Mechanguis on Nov 3, 2015 1:44:58 GMT -5
Gameplay - The first bits are okay, but then you spend the UFO part and the last 20 seconds doing nothing? Try to add more gameplay there, because it's never a good idea to make long stretches of doing nothing in your level, even if it's 2 Decorations - Superb and creative for the most part. I really liked the design. Unfortunately, the last 10 seconds of the level basically have no aesthetics. At the very least shorten the credits part, or add more decorations to the ship part. Music Sync - Ok, but could do better. Overall: 2.5/10, basically the same thing as Cheeseman
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