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Post by FruitZ on Sept 28, 2015 10:47:04 GMT -5
id: 12386713 Hope you like it!
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Post by Viceroy on Sept 29, 2015 0:05:43 GMT -5
This level needs a lot of work. To begin with, I see that you made your trees with ramps. I don't recommend this, because it gives them a funky, messy look. You can always use the black dots for such things. Second, you need more decoration overall. The whole level felt very empty. Don't be afraid to add more color than just the background (which was a bit over-saturated in my opinion). Also, the big black saw-balls felt out of place in the level. The tight ship section felt inconsistent with the difficulty. I recommend nerfing it. This is definitely an introduction into the sunset style, but it needs a lot more. Good luck! megaman9 Needs Improvement, please.
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Post by Guest on Sept 29, 2015 0:29:05 GMT -5
This level needs a lot of work. To begin with, I see that you made your trees with ramps. I don't recommend this, because it gives them a funky, messy look. You can always use the black dots for such things. Second, you need more decoration overall. The whole level felt very empty. Don't be afraid to add more color than just the background (which was a bit over-saturated in my opinion). Also, the big black saw-balls felt out of place in the level. The tight ship section felt inconsistent with the difficulty. I recommend nerfing it. This is definitely an introduction into the sunset style, but it needs a lot more. Good luck! megaman9 Needs Improvement, please. Thanks for the constructive criticism. I agree on the first part mostly. But i've never seen a sunset level with black dots for trees. I agree on the background and decoration part. But not on the sawblades cuz they're invisible. And the tight ship part well that is true too. So i think you're right about everything except for the sawblades.
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Favorite Level: Dance Massacre
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Post by krymson on Oct 12, 2015 19:56:01 GMT -5
I played the level, and I really like it. The decoration could be improved, and the level overall could be organized to a greater extent, but the level is overall great. Edit it a bit, and you're looking at a feature-worthy level in my book.
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