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Favorite Level: Demon Mixed
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Post by Kelrath1985 on Sept 27, 2015 5:03:15 GMT -5
Hi all, this is my first level, 4 weeks in the making. Jumper Adventure Make your way through a series of obstacles and landscapes including a cave and a dungeon. Level ID 12521298 Video: www.youtube.com/watch?v=CTKtomJP5uACredit goes to my friend MrLd0000 for showcasing the level for me  Please rate it 5 stars Hope you all enjoy |
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WillFlame
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Favorite Level: Colourful Overnight
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Post by WillFlame on Oct 13, 2015 17:53:52 GMT -5
Hmm.... Gameplay: Could use some more interesting varieties and balanced difficulty. Make sure there's always something nice to do so players don't get bored.  However, I didn't catch a lot of bugs or glitches throughout the level, but that could've been partially because of the bland gameplay. (7.5/10)Decoration: Your level is lacking a lot here. Most sections are sparsely decorated, and usually use the same decorations throughout. Mix it up, and add wayy more foreground and background decor. Change up the blocks to add a bit more variety too. (6/10)Technical: Music sync definitely had room for improvement, especially with gameplay. Colours were satisfactory, but it certainly could've been much better. The changes didn't happen very smoothly either. (6/10)Overall, a good start to a level that requires lots of polishing to become star- or feature-worthy. (6.5/10)/summon megaman9 @stardust1971 |
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Post by Experience on Oct 13, 2015 18:43:50 GMT -5
Dont put religous things in a GD game. It does nothing but fights. Bad idea. Like the level, dont put religion into things.
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WillFlame
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Direful Reflection
An idea has taken root.
5,190 posts
Discord: WillFlame#5739
Favorite Level: Colourful Overnight
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Post by WillFlame on Oct 13, 2015 19:17:28 GMT -5
Dont put religous things in a GD game. It does nothing but fights. Bad idea. Like the level, dont put religion into things. Wait... where was there ever religion? |
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Post by Experience on Oct 13, 2015 19:18:36 GMT -5
Dont put religous things in a GD game. It does nothing but fights. Bad idea. Like the level, dont put religion into things. Wait... where was there ever religion? In the level or IRL? If IRL thats offensive to me. In the game, yes, he mentions it within level decor. |
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WillFlame
Owner
Direful Reflection
An idea has taken root.
5,190 posts
Discord: WillFlame#5739
Favorite Level: Colourful Overnight
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Post by WillFlame on Oct 13, 2015 19:20:37 GMT -5
Wait... where was there ever religion? In the level or IRL? If IRL thats offensive to me. In the game, yes, he mentions it within level decor. I'm confused... Oh, wait, I see it. It's not that noticeable, and pretty hard to read anyways. Still, good suggestion. |
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Post by Experience on Oct 13, 2015 19:26:35 GMT -5
In the level or IRL? If IRL thats offensive to me. In the game, yes, he mentions it within level decor. I'm confused... Oh, wait, I see it. It's not that noticeable, and pretty hard to read anyways. Still, good suggestion. Yeah. I mean, I've seen people have HUGE fights over religion lulz |
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Favorite Level: Demon Mixed
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Post by Kelrath1985 on Oct 15, 2015 18:13:57 GMT -5
Thanks very much for the feedback guys. I specifically wanted to tell a simple adventure story without the disco lights, but I understand that this involves less technical difficulty. I didn't intend to offend anyone hence the unobtrusive messages but I take your comments on board.
Cheers
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However, I didn't catch a lot of bugs or glitches throughout the level, but that could've been partially because of the bland gameplay. (7.5/10)
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