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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2015 7:46:35 GMT -5
Id: 12417219
so I made another level... I hope you think it's better than my last one, (I wouldn't say feature worthy obviously), but I would as usual appreciate any feedback possible
Thanks ^-^
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Post by Degg on Sept 25, 2015 9:10:30 GMT -5
Id: 12417219 so I made another level... I hope you think it's better than my last one, (I wouldn't say feature worthy obviously), but I would as usual appreciate any feedback possible Thanks ^-^ Overall okay, but it's too boring :3 Just a comment, don't take it too seriously
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Post by TheGeoDude on Sept 25, 2015 10:27:31 GMT -5
I think you have the abilities needed to create really good levels! Some stuff here looked pretty cool! One huge problem is the lack of decoration and detail. Its very blank, and therefore not very visually appealing. Also try to vary stuff up a bit. That first ship looked like it used a ton of copy and pasting :/.
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Post by Lumpy on Sept 25, 2015 17:55:01 GMT -5
Probably, the main thing you could do to improve here would be to do less copy pasting. Most sections have he same blocks/backgrounds repeated over and over again, which makes the level appear rather bland, and play rather boringly. The music synchronization is nice, though. Keep that up!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2015 19:07:05 GMT -5
Ok thanks everyone, I will work upon all of this (I forgot to mention this was an experiment level trying out lots of new styles ) I feel I do really need to practice using less copy and paste, I feel I am a kinda lazy person so thats my biggest problem hehe .w.
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Post by Mechanguis on Oct 15, 2015 5:37:21 GMT -5
Decorations: Although the style was okay, there was tons of copy-pasting in the level. Try to vary the decorations and detail more. Gameplay: Boring. The entire level felt repetitive and empty to be honest. The ball part was also annoying since the markers where the platforms are are hard to see. Music Sync: Needs work. The only part that synced with the music was the ship part with gravity portals. Overall: 2/10. Needs Improvement. /summon @stardust1971 megaman9
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Post by Deleted on Oct 16, 2015 3:25:31 GMT -5
I've been working on all this with a newer level with a very different style from my last two levels submitted here, I've used MUCH less copy paste so far and am using more decorations in the background Again thanks everyone for the feedback :3
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