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Post by thecramp on Sept 19, 2015 14:35:13 GMT -5
Hey, I'm thecramp8, a new content creator. My first level, Wyvern Escape, was released shortly after the release of 2.0. I'm quite proud of it, especially since it's my first level, and I hope that it'll end up in the "Good Levels" thread. My aim while making the level was to make a demon, and it's definitely a hard level, which I hope will be demon soon, but something tells me It's a bit too easy to be a demon. I'm afraid I can't post a video, but I'll try to get a screenshot up as soon as I can. Here's some info! INFORMATION:Name: Wyvern Escape. ID: 11354754 Current Difficulty: Hard. Difficulty in my opinion: Demon. Layout:GREEN = EASY (Compared to the rest of the level.)ORANGE = MEDIUM (Compared to the rest of the level.)RED = HARD (Compared to the rest of the level.)BLACK = AUTO Cube, Ball, Wave, Ship, U.F.O, Ship, Robot.
PICTURES:(Coming Soon!) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Hope you guys enjoy the level
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Post by Drakaglin on Sept 19, 2015 18:06:47 GMT -5
I looked at your level I like the concepts and some designs. The difficulty also remains consistent throughout the level, which is rare in levels these days. Kudos for that. The gameplay is also fun. However, there are, inevitably some negative points as well. The overall look of the level needs to be polished, meaning that you should probably look over it more and fix things that just don't look right. Most of these issues have to do with the ground or the monsters. The ground you chose fits the level nicely, but fix the colours. Examples of this is in the very beginning, when you first start the level, the ground is a bright blue that is very contrasting to the black background. For most people who are expecting good levels, this automatically makes people think of it as a badly made level. You can keep more people playing your level instead of leaving instantly just by fixing that. Make it black like the BG, then gradually fade it in. Some parts are also slightly empty. This is showed right before the robot part with the red theme, I think the background is blue and you tried to create a Geometrical Dominator look to it. The platform design was okay, but everything else was not as good, sorry if I'm too harsh Try filling stuff in with deco and pulsing objects. Again, I apologize in advance for my pickiness, but this will all help you become a better creator one day! Thank you for your submission.
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Post by thecramp on Sept 20, 2015 2:11:46 GMT -5
Thanks! I really appreciate the review. And I hope that these tips will help me improve. I'm very happy to be in the decent levels section.
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