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Favorite Level: Phobos (Unnerfed)
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Post by ginger88895 on Sept 15, 2015 20:59:14 GMT -5
I'm new to level making... Please help me improve my level
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Post by Shocksidian on Sept 18, 2015 16:45:53 GMT -5
you didnt give the id or a full replay so I cant really judge, but for what I've seen it needs some improvement. The level looks underdecorated, and some of the gamepla looks not too enjoyable. The wave part with the teleport portals looks bad because the trails glitch out, but thats robtops fault I guess. I would change it to something else for now. Next time please give the ID or a full replay of the level.
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Post by Starfall on Sept 18, 2015 23:12:44 GMT -5
For a first/second level, that's actually pretty good. (I'm guessing it's first/second since you said "new to level making"...) You should have seen my first level, lol.
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Post by geometricbutton on Sept 19, 2015 3:01:45 GMT -5
Personally I think this should be in the decent section. Like the ideas you out in to it. Just needs some more deco.
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Post by WillFlame on Sept 20, 2015 8:51:33 GMT -5
This is an amazing level for one of the first ones ever made. Are you sure you're new? Foreground decor is good, but background decor is missing. This is a common mistake, so don't worry. Add things to fill up empty space in a creative way. Gameplay could use some work, but it looks decent. Music sync is okay, for the most part. Overall, looks great. Keep making levels, and you'll soon get the hang of it.
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Post by geometricbutton on Sept 21, 2015 3:36:34 GMT -5
The video URL contains the word Goof in perfect capitals.
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Favorite Level: Phobos (Unnerfed)
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Post by ginger88895 on Sept 24, 2015 22:50:37 GMT -5
Thanks for the suggestions! I can't submit the level because I can't verify it I'll try my best to improve this when I'm free. You guys are really helpful and cool!
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