Post by Tundra on Sept 14, 2015 7:30:46 GMT -5
First off, I want to say that your last level wasn't bad. Everyone starts out as inexperienced creators, and some take longer than others to improve to the level of feature worthy. For instance, it took me almost 10 levels to get my first featured one, and even that one wasn't so great.
As a tip for your future levels, it seems to me that you create levels pretty quickly (just scrolling through your levels). Generally, it's better to take a lot of time to create as an inexperienced creator, and once you improve and get used to creating, you can push yourself to be faster again.
Now for this level:
Design: I can see the Cataclysm inspiration. The design is pretty nice, though, but I don't like the monochrome that you have. Try to change the colors from red/beige a little.
Gameplay: Hard. Pretty fun, and pretty difficult. Good for a medium/hard demon, I'd say.
Decoration: Better than before, but once you reach the black BG part it falls off. Always remember to decorate, but make sure you don't get too much overlap between decorations!
Overall feedback: A definite improvement for you! Just try to use some more colors and remember to decorate
Also, I find it's much more fun to create when you're making original ideas
Take some random blocks and mash them together -- see what you can create!
As a tip for your future levels, it seems to me that you create levels pretty quickly (just scrolling through your levels). Generally, it's better to take a lot of time to create as an inexperienced creator, and once you improve and get used to creating, you can push yourself to be faster again.
Now for this level:
Design: I can see the Cataclysm inspiration. The design is pretty nice, though, but I don't like the monochrome that you have. Try to change the colors from red/beige a little.
Gameplay: Hard. Pretty fun, and pretty difficult. Good for a medium/hard demon, I'd say.
Decoration: Better than before, but once you reach the black BG part it falls off. Always remember to decorate, but make sure you don't get too much overlap between decorations!
Overall feedback: A definite improvement for you! Just try to use some more colors and remember to decorate
Also, I find it's much more fun to create when you're making original ideas
Take some random blocks and mash them together -- see what you can create!
