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Post by GrenAde on Sept 13, 2015 22:43:41 GMT -5
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Post by Tundra on Sept 14, 2015 19:04:21 GMT -5
You fell victim to the evils of too much copy/pasting...
The level starts out great! I like the design and decoration in the first cube, but the robot parts could use a little more variety in the decoration (and a little less overlap of the decoration maybe?) A good tip if you have a lot of empty space to decorate is putting something that takes up a lot of space, like circuitry, saws, or scaled up decoration. The wave part starts out nice (although the block design could be a little more interesting) but then just goes on... and on... and on..... This makes the gameplay and design very, very boring. This looks like it was for Viprin's contest (sorry if I'm wrong there), and there's a lot of time for that, so why not use it instead of just copy/pasting repeatedly?
As for the last bit, just a quick note: I think you forgot to change the ground color, unless the blue bg/green ground was intentional.
tl;dr: Without that insanely long and repetitive wave part, this level would have been much better. Also try to vary your decoration a bit more and avoid overlap!
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I wanted to put down a level I didn't rush. It's my first 2.0 level and the ID is 11753487 www.youtube.com/watch?app=desktop&persist_app=1&v=E9BZA_SZX-Y
I wanted to put down a level I didn't rush. It's my first 2.0 level and the ID is 11753487 www.youtube.com/watch?app=desktop&persist_app=1&v=E9BZA_SZX-Y
