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Post by BluBobbie on Apr 1, 2021 19:01:53 GMT -5
ID: 1002005
worked on it on and off for about 4 months, but still my first attempt at something with substance. i hope you enjoy 
edit: the level name is Aoi (blue in japanese)
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Post by x on Apr 2, 2021 22:46:30 GMT -5
I'm assuming yours is called AOI or BLU or whatever because the id didn't work for me but I searched your account and I'm assuming that's the one. But if its not i apologize that's my mistake. Either way you gave me feedback on my level so I'm going to give feedback on yours and unfortunately its very good get bamboozled. The deco is very nice and I don't think many tech like levels that exist in the easy difficulty so props for creativity there. Gameplay is fine but the difficulty makes it slightly boring, although the level isn't very long and I'm not really in the difficulty range for this level so that's really just nitpicking. One issue i have with the level are the invisible objects which are decently annoying as it stands right now. Of course the level is extremely easy which doesn't make it too much of an issue but I do think that they should be around 20 opacity or lower just to get an idea of where the portals/pads are and to fit in with the overall vibe the level adds plus adding some things to make some things above the portals wouldn't hurt. But that's extremely nitpicky and barely worth mentioning at all.
Overall if i were a level judge i would put this at high-end good/feature worthy. Maybe I'm being slightly generous here but there's really nothing to get mad at or criticize besides the invisible stuff. Its just a really solid easy level all the way around. 8.2/10.
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46 posts
Discord: blubobbie#2307
Favorite Level: Past by Neigefeu
Hardest Demon: B
Mini-Profile Background: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1IvVFQ6fjWu7mhAfWPtMjGnKWLkAsfNII
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Post by BluBobbie on Apr 3, 2021 20:31:47 GMT -5
I'm assuming yours is called AOI or BLU or whatever because the id didn't work for me but I searched your account and I'm assuming that's the one. But if its not i apologize that's my mistake. Either way you gave me feedback on my level so I'm going to give feedback on yours and unfortunately its very good get bamboozled. The deco is very nice and I don't think many tech like levels that exist in the easy difficulty so props for creativity there. Gameplay is fine but the difficulty makes it slightly boring, although the level isn't very long and I'm not really in the difficulty range for this level so that's really just nitpicking. One issue i have with the level are the invisible objects which are decently annoying as it stands right now. Of course the level is extremely easy which doesn't make it too much of an issue but I do think that they should be around 20 opacity or lower just to get an idea of where the portals/pads are and to fit in with the overall vibe the level adds plus adding some things to make some things above the portals wouldn't hurt. But that's extremely nitpicky and barely worth mentioning at all. Overall if i were a level judge i would put this at high-end good/feature worthy. Maybe I'm being slightly generous here but there's really nothing to get mad at or criticize besides the invisible stuff. Its just a really solid easy level all the way around. 8.2/10. that was the right level! i hear what you say about invisible objects, i do kind of have a problem with that, but i can see how someone would get confused seeing both paths leading to death xd. i'll fix that and update the level. thanks!  |
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Post by cilpy on Apr 29, 2021 18:49:28 GMT -5
The ID is 68054677, 1002005 is the song ID.
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Post by ZingerX on May 7, 2021 23:18:25 GMT -5
Really like the way it looks, and the design is consistent throughout so that's always a plus.
That said, nothing in the design really does change throughout the level. You have a really clean design, but it kind of overstays its welcome if I'm being honest.
Though, there isn't much time for a welcome since the level is 34 seconds long anyway. Kind of short for a full level, but that's minor.
Aside from those, the block design along with the colors look pretty good. Kind of minimalistic, but I can tell that's what you were going for. Towards the second half of the level, the designs kind of seem to disappear though. Like there are random blue spikes floating on nothing, and slopes with nothing but glow on them. I think it'd be better if you kept the blocks from the first half.
Finally, the transition screens/endscreen. I have nothing to say. They look really nice.
As for the gameplay, I mean it's 2-3 star so no criticism there.
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46 posts
Discord: blubobbie#2307
Favorite Level: Past by Neigefeu
Hardest Demon: B
Mini-Profile Background: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1IvVFQ6fjWu7mhAfWPtMjGnKWLkAsfNII
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Post by BluBobbie on May 11, 2021 22:28:28 GMT -5
Really like the way it looks, and the design is consistent throughout so that's always a plus. That said, nothing in the design really does change throughout the level. You have a really clean design, but it kind of overstays its welcome if I'm being honest. Though, there isn't much time for a welcome since the level is 34 seconds long anyway. Kind of short for a full level, but that's minor. Aside from those, the block design along with the colors look pretty good. Kind of minimalistic, but I can tell that's what you were going for. Towards the second half of the level, the designs kind of seem to disappear though. Like there are random blue spikes floating on nothing, and slopes with nothing but glow on them. I think it'd be better if you kept the blocks from the first half. Finally, the transition screens/endscreen. I have nothing to say. They look really nice. As for the gameplay, I mean it's 2-3 star so no criticism there. i do see that the design kinda is too consistent throughout the level. i had tried to combat that by changing the shape of the structures, but that was kinda something i threw on at the end before i called it a day. for future projects i will try to have more variation, and of course try to make it longer. |
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Post by moazaya on Aug 21, 2021 16:47:12 GMT -5
Not bad just add more objects and make it longer than 1 minute so you get in the magic section
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