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Post by Jackattack on Dec 3, 2020 22:09:11 GMT -5
My new level is going to be caled "on fire" and I submited this part of the level to be judged because I wanted a profesional opinion on it. Name: Place on fire 2 (I copied the level So i could save te real level for when its done. Song: Creo: place on fire Difficulty: 5-6 stars. ID:65567117
Style: Modern and Glow. Objects: ~3650 Length:38 seconds, medium
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Post by Jackattack on Dec 3, 2020 22:10:15 GMT -5
I will add a vidieo tommoro.
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Post by thegrassguy on Dec 4, 2020 12:25:22 GMT -5
Ew that 33% transition with the invisible pad. Colors in the ship also need improvement.
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Post by Jackattack on Dec 4, 2020 13:36:35 GMT -5
ok.
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Post by Jackattack on Dec 4, 2020 17:41:45 GMT -5
!!!I UPDATED IT NEW ID IS 65582868!!!
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Post by RFMX on Dec 6, 2020 3:22:39 GMT -5
Okay, this level is obviously incomplete, as shown in the level description and the opening post. Rule 4 of the Judging Panels states that:
4) No submitting unfinished levels, including but not limited to layouts, previews, etc. These go in the Level Suggestions (Non Judged) board.
I'll be moving this to the Level Suggestions (Non Judged) board. Setting that aside, here are some comments from me.
- Platforms in the first pink part is barely visible in front of the almost same pink background. This makes reading the layout quite hard, and it does not really fit the white outline of spikes. The later part also have the similar problem on the spikes. Colours is an important thing to get right, so please dig on the details about it. - Use Don't Fade and Don't Enter to make the objects stay opaque at the edges of the screen. - Try not to let the cube travel horizontally in a straight line. Much better idle sections include, simply dropping off platforms, riding up slopes, mini auto sections. (with variety in pads and movement) - To be honest, this level has lots of empty spaces that needs to be filled up. Add air decoration, and have more detail in block deco. The background could also get some tinkering. Some subtle repeating patterns will already do the job.
>>> Moving to Level Suggestions (Non Judged)
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