My layout to Viprin's MCC3!

klaux
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My layout to Viprin's MCC3! Sept 9, 2019 17:07:37 GMT -5 via Tapatalk

Post by klaux on Sept 9, 2019 17:07:37 GMT -5

any feedback is much aprecciated!
the layout: youtu.be/6m9lHgQIABE

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My layout to Viprin's MCC3! Sept 15, 2019 8:28:00 GMT -5

Post by AquaHeart on Sept 15, 2019 8:28:00 GMT -5

The first part looks fine, but from around 0:12 onwards the gameplay gets a little less creative. Try to spice it up a bit more, kind of like what you did with the first 12 seconds.

It also felt a little short to me, you can't really show much gameplay creating skill with a 30 second layout. Try to use less of the orb-based custom gameplay, and explore more conventional, yet original spider gameplay concepts.

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My layout to Viprin's MCC3! Sept 15, 2019 10:58:41 GMT -5 via Tapatalk

Post by klaux on Sept 15, 2019 10:58:41 GMT -5

Sept 15, 2019 8:28:00 GMT -5 AquaHeart said:

The first part looks fine, but from around 0:12 onwards the gameplay gets a little less creative. Try to spice it up a bit more, kind of like what you did with the first 12 seconds.

It also felt a little short to me, you can't really show much gameplay creating skill with a 30 second layout. Try to use less of the orb-based custom gameplay, and explore more conventional, yet original spider gameplay concepts.

gotcha!

Post by klaux on Sept 9, 2019 17:07:37 GMT -5

Post by AquaHeart on Sept 15, 2019 8:28:00 GMT -5

Post by klaux on Sept 15, 2019 10:58:41 GMT -5

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