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Post by iban on May 7, 2019 8:25:37 GMT -5
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its a level thats mostly black and rainbow
im pretty proud of it but i want to know if its actually good
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Post by spacebro007 on May 13, 2019 10:04:57 GMT -5
This level has some good ideas, however the way it’s executed could use a little bit of work. Gameplay: The gameplay could use some work. The gameplay doesn’t sync up with the music very well and is bland in quite a few places. Also, some of the gameplay doesn’t fit the difficulty of the overall level, such as the ship part at 15%. Decoration: Decoration I feel is where this level lacks the most. Although the rainbow effects on the ground and blocks are pretty cool, there are no other decorations to fill the space and make the level more interesting. Also, the background throughout most of the level is empty. Next time, try making a custom background in some sections (you did this in some places already), also use more decorations and obstacles to fill the space such as saws, glows, or chains. Even small decorations can make a big difference in making a level feel more full and lively. Also, the blocks would’ve looked much better if they were as smooth as the ground was (ground line looked very smooth and I really liked that part). Sync: Once again, the sync in this level needs some work. As I already said, the gameplay doesn’t sync well. Other than that, there are no background flashes and not enough switches between monochrome and rainbow to keep it interesting. The switches that are there feel out of place and do not flow very smoothly. Conclusion: Overall, I do really enjoy the idea of a monochrome and rainbow theme for a level, however this level is a little bit underdecorated and doesn’t sync very well. Try playing around with filling the space, background flashes, and custom backgrounds as a start to improve the look of the level, and try to make the gameplay sync better with the music and flow better between sections. Overall I believe this belongs in “needs improvement” This happens to be my first review so take everything I’m saying here with a grain of salt. Thanks  Edit: I also know that you used custom backgrounds in some places, however I’m just saying to do it in more places to make the level more interesting. |
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