6 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: My first decoration level (currently unnamed, and also a test)
Hardest Demon: The Nightmare (In my opinion The Lightning Road is easier)
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Post by angelinajamie on Jan 19, 2019 7:09:05 GMT -5
Easy circles by me! If you’d like, you can rate it. 51260033
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Post by AquaHeart on Jan 19, 2019 22:49:28 GMT -5
wOw AmAzEiNg 10,069/10!!!!!1! I love the originality, the backgrounds are spot on, the color combinations an absolute blast. The block design is so out of this world, I must say you are better than creators in the likes of Serponge and JonathanGD! :OO Are you sure you aren't in update 2.8? The orbs are so well placed, and the sync is just... perfection. I couldn't find ANY bugs even though I really, really tried. Why haven't you applied to GeoStorm yet? With your talent, Geometry Dash would become great again!! <3 <3
kill me
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Post by Hexhammer / MJ on Jan 20, 2019 1:44:43 GMT -5
wOw AmAzEiNg 10,069/10!!!!!1! I love the originality, the backgrounds are spot on, the color combinations an absolute blast. The block design is so out of this world, I must say you are better than creators in the likes of Serponge and JonathanGD! :OO Are you sure you aren't in update 2.8? The orbs are so well placed, and the sync is just... perfection. I couldn't find ANY bugs even though I really, really tried. Why haven't you applied to GeoStorm yet? With your talent, Geometry Dash would become great again!! <3 <3 kill meif the level is in the judging section then no matter how lacking the quality may be you just simply don't leave comments like this or to word it differently, don't make jokes when there's a request for criticism |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2019 6:58:03 GMT -5
What Hex said, not the suited response for any level in this board. On topic, as a layout I feel that this could do good, if it's changed to have more sync and less orb-heavy gameplay. It's great that you try, keep trying and eventually you will get it going.  |
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Post by AquaHeart on Jan 20, 2019 12:29:50 GMT -5
Sorry about my response yesterday, I wasn't having the greatest day
Anyways yeah on a serious note try to make your gameplay less orb based, make the transitions a little less awkward, make the wave easier to sightread. It takes practice but you'll get somewhere eventually
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Post by flypiggy22 on Jan 26, 2019 16:59:02 GMT -5
Hey!
This is my first review, so let me know if there is a problem with it!
The cube section at the beginning is very orb-heavy and spam clicking will get you past the bulk of it. I would suggest making that part slightly more challenging, possibly adding fakes or harder timings. I would also suggest adding some decorations to the background and orbs to make it look nicer.
The gameplay of the ship section is fun and enjoyable, but the block decoration and the background deco aren't spectacular. I would try making the background pulse a bit (as the level is supposed to be a "Nine Circles" level). The block design is totally up to you, I would suggest adding just a little bit more color! On another note, there is an unneeded portal that switches the ship into the ship again. A gravity portal might fit there instead.
The wave part is also fine and has a decent "Nine Circles" pulse. I might add a little bit of the pulse to the blocks and have the colors quickly alternate between black and the background color. This part also contains unneeded portals though, and I would replace those with gravity switch portals to make the level slightly more complicated.
Overall, it's a good start to a level! I suggest you keep on pushing to finish this!
P.S. If you hold the dash orb from the start, you can go under the ship part! I would just add S blocks after the first jump ring so that you die if you don't let go early enough.
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