[ti]Hard[/ti]Burn Journey[YouTube Video]

Judging on request : )


Gameplay
You've definitely improved from Into the Ocean from the consistency department. The gameplay felt smooth and enjoyable. The problem is the poor and sudden transitions, such as the first teleport. It felt too sudden without warning, and the teleport portals should be visible to some extent. The same is with the spider, try to make the transition easier, so the player becomes comfortable with the segment. Throwing sudden gameplay in timing-based vehicles like the spider won't be fun for most people. The next ship had the moving objects executed well, but the colours made it hard to see. Consider adding thicker lines or contrasting colours. The level felt smooth from then on and they are no complaints, except in the spider and other areas complicated structures to make the level more interesting. You should also work on saw placement, don't place in useless areas or crowd them very closely. Overall much better and decent gameplay. Good job.

2.5/4 (decent-good)

Decoration
The deco is better than last time, but unfortunately not by much. I can see you attempted to add air deco, but the colours were very messy and the wrong objects were used. Speaking of colours, that is the main problem with the decoration in this level. In some areas the contrasted too much, and in other areas they blended in. Try to experiment and see what colours go well together! I could see some nice glow, but the objects inside were only a single block type. Use multiple block types when decorating your blocks. Try a bit harder next time! the copy of hexagon force design though

1/4 (Needs Improvement)

Sync
I LOVED the sync in this level. It flowed very nicely with the beat. I've seen featured levels with worse sync. Amazing Job!

2/2 (Feature worthy)

OVERALL: 5.5/10 (decent)

You're getting there! I recommend you watch a design tutorial on YouTube, by the way.
Hope you learned something new : )

-cos

No problem. DM me if in doubt : )