6 posts
Favorite Level: Timeless
Hardest Demon: -SIRIUS-
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Post by whitydrago on Dec 20, 2018 17:10:23 GMT -5
Yeah ik i have posted this in the non judged one... But i kinda want to see what people think about my level! Oh and my block design is kinda simpel... I just like making the backround more.
Level Name: Territi Id: 50696053
Youtube Link (Ik its kinda bad quality):
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186 posts
Discord: join in my server to find me
Clans: The Yardies
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Golden Future
Hardest Demon: Blade of Justice
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Post by SirMezichek on Dec 21, 2018 6:17:39 GMT -5
I'll give the feedback. Nice level you just created btw
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1,388 posts
Discord: Swifter#9933
Clans: Swifter Server and Dragon's Den
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Stalemate by Nox
Hardest Demon: Necropolis by iiiNeptuneiii
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Post by Swifter on Dec 21, 2018 10:18:51 GMT -5
Gameplay looks nice, looks like fun. I’ll try it and give full feedback on that in the future. I couldn’t hear the song that well, so I can’t talk about sync. As for the deco, it looks really nice. But the block design is empty and not really anything special. I give this about a 7/10 for the deco. Overall, it could be rate worthy decoration wise.
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6 posts
Favorite Level: Timeless
Hardest Demon: -SIRIUS-
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Post by whitydrago on Jan 15, 2019 10:44:56 GMT -5
Gameplay looks nice, looks like fun. I’ll try it and give full feedback on that in the future. I couldn’t hear the song that well, so I can’t talk about sync. As for the deco, it looks really nice. But the block design is empty and not really anything special. I give this about a 7/10 for the deco. Overall, it could be rate worthy decoration wise. When are you going to do the full feedback? Its been quite awhile.
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Post by Cuck_gmd on Jan 15, 2019 13:33:59 GMT -5
This is quite good gameplay and colors, just the block design is quite empty. Try to add more decoration next time otherwise the player will get bored
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Post by athletics2i on Jan 15, 2019 19:09:06 GMT -5
This is my first review, but I know you have waited a long time to get feedback so I am gonna try to give some detailed feedback
First ball part
This part has very very simplistic gameplay and design. I would go for a custom background to add a bit of flare to the level, so it looks more detailed and worthy of a possible rate. The sync is slightly off on this part, which isn't a big deal, but it can be annoying to react to the moving objects. The face in the background looks really cook though, but I would like to see more details in this part. 4/10
Ship Part
The ship part feels underdecorated as well and way to simplistic. There is also very little sync gameplay wise, but the effects sync nicely. I would still like to see the objects pop up in sync to the music. The part also feels a bit untidy, and doesn't have finishing touches (glow, etc.)- it just feels quickly made. I suggest you add a more complex custom background, include more detailed and unique block designs, and include more glow. 4.5/10
U.F.O Part
This part felt like it had a lot of effort put into it, and is the most visually appealing part. The gameplay is still very repetitive, and the sync is a bit off. I have to say the background and block design and very unique. The custom background was a good idea (I liked the cheese and the icon art) but the grid design around it just makes the level look messy, and ruins the part. Even if you added a more generic background, this part would look a whole lot better. This part feels good to play because I can feel much more effort put into the part. 6/10
Robot Part
This part has a very cool custom background which would look great in any featured level, but is lacking in block design and there is very little sync, if any at all. The background is very unique, and is the highlight of the level. The art is also very well done. It's a shame the blocks are so plain and the sync is messy.
6/10
The level ends there, just at above 50 seconds in length, so I would suggest increasing the length of the level.
Comments
This level is a very good start, with very well done art and some cool effects. A level like this will never get rated, because most rated levels feel complete in all parts, but if you added more block designs, better gameplay and sync, more effects, and made this level longer, it could probably have a high chance at being rated. However, in the current state, this level feels to bare and unintresting to catch the attention of RobTop. Keep up the work, though, because this level is pretty good overall.
After some thinking, I've decided this level belongs in decent.
On an unrelated note, whoever is reading this, please check out my level placidity. I'd love to have some feedback so I can improve on my next level.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2019 16:21:27 GMT -5
I agree with most of what the above review said. Moving objects are a pain, maybe colors didn't work together, lots of copy-pasted pillars and structures, cutting teleport transitions. A lot of the plain old blocks need more much layering and detail, it's just boring right now.
I however think this level is a high Needs Improvement.
Also to the reviewer, do not advertise your own levels in someone else's thread, that's extremely fucking disrespectful.
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