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Post by noodler on Sept 22, 2018 17:52:16 GMT -5
ID - 48587292 Requested Stars - 6 (Harder) Yes it is outdated Sorry I have nothing to record it with because my files get corrupted every time I try to.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2019 18:40:18 GMT -5
Decoration wise it gets very repetitive quickly, with basically the same custom background used in different deviations. Not only that, but the entire level's foreground consists of just basic black blocks and it looks very dated and basic. Try and add multiple layers of objects and add some depth and complexity to those blocks, maybe some air deco in some places, and change up the custom background a bit.
The main place this level fails in is the gameplay. There are a ton of skips riddled everywhere. Both green orbs at 0%, the last two blue orbs at 1%, the red and black orb at 2%. Then we get to the ship part, which actually is fairly dynamic and implements some variation in elevation. I don't know why you made the auto pads at 10% invisible. The screen stays darkened at 11%. Back to skips, the second two blue orbs are completely bypassable at 12% as well, and the black orb at 23%. 25%, the black orb is offscreen until it's too late and you've died. This is an excellent opportunity to bring up the previous offscreen jumps and orbs as well. Make sure the gameplay is sight readable and that the player can see and react to what is coming up next with an adequate amount of time, otherwise the level becomes memorization and rather annoying. 29%, the transition into the auto part is pretty horrible, but not only that you're still clicking which causes you to jump in the auto and die. Remember that sight readability I was just talking about. Again at 84%, with the invisible gravity portal. Why does it have to be invisible? The robot portal isn't? Sight reading. It's key. Finally, just about every portal is skippable through those gaps at 86%. So is the blue orb at 91%, and again with an offscreen drop.
Really try and patch those gaps in the level that allow the player to skip. Ask others to playtest to find things you might not find yourself. And try to update your decoration and make it more in depth and detailed.
For now due to the overabundance of skips, this level Needs Improvement.
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