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Post by jakexreign on Dec 11, 2017 15:35:24 GMT -5
I Would like to get some honest opinions about my level "Avolare". My GD Name is: JakexRain ID: 35187455 Requested Stars: 8 Has a little over 63K Objects.
Here is a Video of the level. www.youtube.com/watch?v=33t0CDgB7KM
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Post by jakexreign on Dec 11, 2017 15:41:48 GMT -5
Also that video is a little outdated. I Just updated the art of the level
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Post by incompl on Dec 15, 2017 2:32:36 GMT -5
The 2000* ball and the 90 secret coins ship? You have good taste in icons. On topic, sync overall was pretty good though the parts with a lot of orbs (namely the beginning) were a bit too easy to just spam tap and get through, which detracts from the gameplay a bit. Also, avoiding making portals invisible. Set them to a low opacity if you have to but don't make them completely invisible since that also detracts from the gameplay. No other complaints there otherwise.
The design of the level starts out pretty solid. A little empty in places with large black patches or open sections of sky but good all the same. The best part by far is the white and rainbow bit right before the drop. I don't care how old that effect is, it still looks great and the colour palette works well. Everything during the drop is where the design portion falters. The air decoration becomes mostly just clouds and the block design becomes overly simple for how little variation there is in the foreground/background. It would've been fine for one part but the clouds thing does on for three parts, the last of which adds hot air balloons which is a nice touch but spamming the saws definitely was not.
All in all, it's a good level. Starts of good but then peters after the drop. Some more complex block design during the drop would definitely make those parts better.
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