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Post by CreativeGuy on Nov 11, 2017 10:30:06 GMT -5
I guess I'll wait until Whaley updates his review to comment on/approve anything. Anyone feel free to tag me when he's done.
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Post by FlashFighters on Nov 13, 2017 1:34:11 GMT -5
I guess I'll wait until Whaley updates his review to comment on/approve anything. Anyone feel free to tag me when he's done. I believe he‘s done
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Post by CreativeGuy on Nov 13, 2017 7:23:40 GMT -5
I guess I'll wait until Whaley updates his review to comment on/approve anything. Anyone feel free to tag me when he's done. I believe he‘s done I'm aware, I just haven't gotten around to it yet.
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Post by Zirphynx on Nov 14, 2017 7:41:51 GMT -5
Wait... headhonchkrow is female? I thought she was male. brother was guy but he abandoned ship and now i have this account :3 ok then
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Post by FlashFighters on Nov 16, 2017 15:00:06 GMT -5
I'm aware, I just haven't gotten around to it yet. ok ^-^
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Post by FlashFighters on Nov 21, 2017 12:19:13 GMT -5
I'm aware, I just haven't gotten around to it yet. Could u please look at it? It has been over two weeks since i posted the thread. Thanks
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Post by RedWhaley14 on Nov 21, 2017 16:04:35 GMT -5
Good-Featured. You can choose.
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Post by CreativeGuy on Nov 21, 2017 17:28:09 GMT -5
First of all, I'd like to address the gameplay to the creator. Overall, the gameplay isn't too bad, however, the portals absolutely ruin it. Throughout the entire level, I had no clue what was going on because of the weird portal designs, which I see many aspiring creators try to attempt, but unfortunately, many do it wrong. One big tip I have is: stick with the color scheme! The color scheme is the only way the player knows for sure what gamemode/change is coming up, because everyone learned this game with the same exact one. The problem here is, you assume that the player knows what they mean, and I don't blame you for that, I do it too, I think everyone does it at some point, but to me it just felt like deciphering hieroglyphics, because none of the designs were obvious to me, even the gravity changes. While you may think it's obvious that it's saying which direction is down, I thought it meant up, and I never got used to it up until I beat the level. Another issue that occurs with these is that they seem like decoration, so the player often gets caught of guard, this is especially prevalent in the wave sections. Now I realize that may come off as harsh, if so I apologize. I just want to give you some basic points to help you improve your levels, and that is one of the things if you change, it will dramatically improve the quality of your level, trust me on this one. Alright, onto the review. Your gameplay section is fine. I see you mentioned the portals, but I would've stressed it a bit more, like I did above. (Although not as much as I did, I just wanted to get my point across since I'm not doing a full review) Gameplay isn't too fun though, even without the annoying transitions, mainly because it's a slow level. I can't really fault the creator as a majority of it is just the song, although I do believe a bit more could've been done with the gameplay, as it just really felt like going through the obstacles, not much variety to make it interesting. Also, I would've mentioned something about the shake trigger, as that really needs to go. The rest I agree with mostly, but the block design isn't as amazing as you make it out to be in my opinion, since it just repeats throughout the whole level, but it certainly is a huge improvement. Review Approved! Nice and detailed, and I love how you broke it down in each section. I disagree with some of your points, naturally, but it's not too much of a big deal unless it continues to skew your ratings. Honestly, I believe this belongs in Decent, more low-end, however it certainly would've been in Needs Improvement if it weren't for the update. Also, sorry for the long wait.
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