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Post by stumerk on Nov 3, 2017 1:59:36 GMT -5
Hi all, plz check out my level Grateful. ID is 38544689. Currently a hard but I reckon it should be a normal. Please give me any advice or improvements I could put into my future levels. Feel free to add me as a friend too. My in game account name is Stumerk. Thanks and enjoy!  |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2017 19:38:00 GMT -5
It isn't my favourite level.
A lot of things seem out of place in this, especially the sudden orbs that fly up into your face. The move triggers aren't used very well in that sense. The music sync isn't the best, too.
The air decoration is quite empty and the block design is bland. I also think that the colours don't match up quite well either.
Take a look at recent levels, and compare yours to them. Look at the differences, and then take what you have learned and put them in your future levels.
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Post by RedWhaley14 on Nov 4, 2017 20:09:11 GMT -5
Hi! This is my very first review! I’ll try to be as helpful and thorough as possible!
Level Name: Grateful
ID: 38544689
My Personal Difficulty: 4 Stars
My Rating: Needs Improvement
The Gameplay (5/10)
The gameplay for this level is okay. Not the best, but not terrible either. The first cube is pretty good, but 7% can be buggy, and the blue orbs appear out of nowhere, and are also pretty buggy. The ball part is mostly auto, but the transition between auto and no-auto is kind of sudden. You should the player more time to react. The ship is pretty fun. The UFO has ok gameplay, but the transition to the spider is horrible. I kept dying there because of the white screen. Try to make your transitions more visible. The Spider was pretty dual spider was really fun, I’ll admit. The wave is ok. The last cube was nothing special. This level has some bad parts, but the gameplay otherwise is pretty fun. It also syncs pretty well it seems
The Decoration (3/10)
The decoration for this level is a mixed bag. The first cube has really odd colors. Also, the moving objects make the level seem funky. The air decoration is lacking, and so is the block design. The ball part doesn’t have any block design other than clouds, which is kind of cool, but the air deco is lacking again, but you didn’t really need it because the background stood out well. The decoration is very similar after the ship, but it gets way better. The block design is ok, but I would recommend putting your decoration against white. The air decoration is again lacking. The UFO has no air decoration or block design at all. The spider is pretty good, but is again lacking air deco. The wave is basically the same as the ship, and the last cube is basically the same as the first cube. I would recommend you work on air deco more, as that is what really affected this.
The Backgrounds/Effects (4/10)
There are really only two backgrounds in this level, the one in the ball and the one in the UFO. The ball background’s colors don’t mix with the BG behind its’. This is a major problem. I would change the color to make it blend better. The UFO background is actually REALLY good. Other than that, there really isn’t much to say.
Originality Multiplier: 1
This level isn’t the most creative, but it has it’s moments. The UFO background was genius, the block design seemed thought out, and I liked the clouds as blocks. However, after that, nothing else is really that original.
Final Score: 12/30 (Needs Improvement)
This level is not the best, but it does have its moments. The gameplay is okay, the creativity is not bad, this level is just mediocre. I would work on Deco and Backgrounds a lot more, but they aren’t too bad either.
What To Improve:
-Try to have less moving objects
-Blend the colors better
-Make better transitions.
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Post by CreativeGuy on Nov 4, 2017 23:17:34 GMT -5
Hi! This is my very first review! I’ll try to be as helpful and thorough as possible! Level Name: Grateful ID: 38544689 My Personal Difficulty: 4 Stars My Rating: Needs Improvement The Gameplay (5/10)The gameplay for this level is okay. Not the best, but not terrible either. The first cube is pretty good, but 7% can be buggy, and the blue orbs appear out of nowhere, and are also pretty buggy. The ball part is mostly auto, but the transition between auto and no-auto is kind of sudden. You should the player more time to react. The ship is pretty fun. The UFO has ok gameplay, but the transition to the spider is horrible. I kept dying there because of the white screen. Try to make your transitions more visible. The Spider was pretty dual spider was really fun, I’ll admit. The wave is ok. The last cube was nothing special. This level has some bad parts, but the gameplay otherwise is pretty fun. It also syncs pretty well it seems The Decoration (3/10)The decoration for this level is a mixed bag. The first cube has really odd colors. Also, the moving objects make the level seem funky. The air decoration is lacking, and so is the block design. The ball part doesn’t have any block design other than clouds, which is kind of cool, but the air deco is lacking again, but you didn’t really need it because the background stood out well. The decoration is very similar after the ship, but it gets way better. The block design is ok, but I would recommend putting your decoration against white. The air decoration is again lacking. The UFO has no air decoration or block design at all. The spider is pretty good, but is again lacking air deco. The wave is basically the same as the ship, and the last cube is basically the same as the first cube. I would recommend you work on air deco more, as that is what really affected this. The Backgrounds/Effects (4/10)There are really only two backgrounds in this level, the one in the ball and the one in the UFO. The ball background’s colors don’t mix with the BG behind its’. This is a major problem. I would change the color to make it blend better. The UFO background is actually REALLY good. Other than that, there really isn’t much to say. Originality Multiplier: 1This level isn’t the most creative, but it has it’s moments. The UFO background was genius, the block design seemed thought out, and I liked the clouds as blocks. However, after that, nothing else is really that original. Final Score: 12/30 (Needs Improvement)This level is not the best, but it does have its moments. The gameplay is okay, the creativity is not bad, this level is just mediocre. I would work on Deco and Backgrounds a lot more, but they aren’t too bad either. What To Improve:-Try to have less moving objects -Blend the colors better -Make better transitions. Wonderful first review! It's clear that you took time on this and made sure to point out specific parts, good job! I definitely agree on the colors, nothing just really fit well. I also strongly agree on the moving objects. However, this level does have some good points, like some parts of the gameplay, as you mentioned, and I'd say the block design later on had some detail and effort put into it, while not the best. One suggestion for any of your future reviews: Try to elaborate more, such as explaining what about a section made it fun. However, this first review is way better than most first reviews I've seen. Review Approved. Moving to Needs Improvement. Personally I find it a bit more High-end, but that's definitely debatable. |
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Post by stumerk on Nov 13, 2017 0:41:53 GMT -5
Thanks guys i really needed feedback. Please check out my newest level Up which is quite good in my books. Thanks!
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