13 posts
|
Post by alex1304 on Oct 31, 2017 17:15:49 GMT -5
Hello everyone, Finally released a new level after taking a little break from building. This is my entry for Doom contest, so I was kinda restricted in terms of colors but I'm still satisfied with the result  Now I'm waiting for some constructive feedback, because I know that I'm not an absolute professional and I still have things to improve here and there... Well, here is the level info: Name: Kotoruption Creator: Alex1304 (me) Level ID: 38693063 Song : Kotori - Nanamori (GD Sharks Remix) Length : 1min 17s (Long) Difficulty: Easy Demon Objects: 38k LDM included? Yes (removes 5k objects) Collab? No YouTube video: |
|
2,135 posts
Discord: headhonchkrow#2162
Creator Points: 0
Hardest Demon: Effot 60%
Mini-Profile Background: {"image":"https://i.imgur.com/VEt4kTW.png","color":""}
Mini-Profile Name Color: 0a602e
Mini-Profile Text Color: ae220b
|
Post by headhonchkrow on Nov 1, 2017 3:32:55 GMT -5
omg the song said f word !!1!11!
This is a pretty good level, but the background when the face pops up feels really empty and the end feels really rushed at some parts.
|
|
13 posts
|
Post by alex1304 on Nov 24, 2017 18:33:06 GMT -5
Bumping this since it's been here for 3 weeks now
|
|
3,250 posts
Discord: œ
Clans: œ
Favorite Level: œ
Hardest Demon: œ
|
Post by œ on Nov 24, 2017 19:01:32 GMT -5
Can you confirm whether Mulpan sent this or not?
|
|
396 posts
Mini-Profile Background: {"image":"","color":"1d81bf"}
Mini-Profile Name Color: 1c2833
Mini-Profile Text Color: aed6f1
|
Post by Cheeseman on Nov 25, 2017 15:51:22 GMT -5
Design - 1.9/2.5
I can't really fault the design of the level, but the usage of basically one colour throughout the level means I can't rate this any higher. I'm pretty sure there could have been some minor colour changes/variation throughout.
Decoration - 1.4/2
A very solid effort and there is nothing that really stands out to me as being an issue. Not overkeen on the wall of creatures coming in from the left at one point, but that is just personal preference of course. The main reason this has been marked down somewhat is that it really didn't blow me away, and there were a few sections that seemed a bit empty. Also not too keen on the weird demon face either.
Gameplay - 3.6/4.5
I am very impressed with the gameplay element of this level. There are very few things that bother me and it has great variety throughout as well as fitting the song perfectly. The transition in the drop did seem a bit copy+paste and underwhelming to me, and the end seems far too easy, rather boring and rushed. Otherwise, it is a very solid effort.
Music Synching - 1/1
To summarise, brilliant!
Creativity Index - x1
Nothing new, nothing old. Nothing overused either. No multiplier applied.
Other Observations Index - x1
Nothing that has truly bothered me
RESULT: 7.8/10 - GOOD LEVEL - (RATE WORTHY)
For: Fun and well-suited gameplay, reasonable design, superb music synching
Against: A bit too monotonous in colour, lacklustre end, a few decoration niggles
This is a very solid effort and is definitely a level that is worth noticing. My calculations lead to a star-rating for the level although I wouldn't be surprised with this being a featured level in the future. Although this could have a bit more wow, a very good job!
|
|
3,250 posts
Discord: œ
Clans: œ
Favorite Level: œ
Hardest Demon: œ
|
Post by œ on Dec 1, 2017 15:01:42 GMT -5
|
|
1,530 posts
Discord: CreativeGuy#3418
Creator Points: 0
Mini-Profile Background: {"image":"","color":"1c23be"}
Mini-Profile Name Color: 06001b
Mini-Profile Text Color: 06001b
|
Post by CreativeGuy on Dec 1, 2017 20:40:45 GMT -5
Moving to Rated Levels and congrats on the Epic! |
|
13 posts
|
Post by alex1304 on Dec 11, 2017 12:35:54 GMT -5
Thank you guys, I take note of the feedback |
|
