Before judging - Please wait 2-3 weeks before tagging a judge. I can see that this thread was posted on the 13th of October and it is 1 week from then. I will let it slide for now, but this is for future reference.
Level Name: Dathanna
ID: 37436040
Creator(s): Mindflips
Song: Activate (SKILLZmakeKILLZ)
Song ID: 690904
Gameplay - 19/33
Let's start off with the pros of the gameplay. I actually somewhat like the music synchronization in this level. The music sync is on point and happens to be very chill with the song. Maybe a little bit more music sync in the level would be good, but for now it is okay and passes by me. I also like the use of all of the vehicles in the level, but also the mini portals, and gravity portals are really well executed in this level. So nice job here.
Here is where we can improve. I am going to say the gameplay for all vehicles are not good. Now, I know from me being a 4x speed builder how hard it is to create gameplay in the speed, however, you don't have the best 4x speed. I feel like it needs to be pixel perfect jumps at times and that is not necessary for a Medium Demon level. Also, the jump orbs are all very buggy. The black orb at the first cube can be skipped and other jump orbs such as the first two jump orbs at the start of the level are super buggy. Not only do you have to hit those jump rings extremely late, you have to hit them at the exact right time. There is no leeway to this.
Improvements: Fix jump orb timings, and work on vehicle gameplay in the 4x.
Design - 25/33
I would like to say the design is actually quite decent in this level. It looks really nice. You have matching colors with uses of opacities, blends, and lastly good block design structures. I don't feel like it is to repetitive. It really fills the space quite a bit and helps show that your level looks really good and really 2.1 like. That is the nice part about your level. I can see from the start that the level is quite colorful and feels like a modern 2.1 level. Nice work on the design in this level.
Here is something that I don't like. This is just me being picky, but I don't think that this is your creating style. I feel like you are more of a "theme" builder rather than a color builder in 2.1. To me, something doesn't stand out and that catches my eye. I feel like you should try some new block designs and try building a thematic level rather than a color level. I see this from the block designs. The block designs in this level look like they are all apart of a theme to me, and not to a level like this. Now, I am not saying the block designs are bad, I am saying that they don't fit they level as a colorful/joyful level.
Improvements: Try doing more theme building
Originality - 24/34
Quite the original level you have here. Honestly, I like what this level has and what is has for you in the future. You have some stuff in the block designs that I have never seen work together. This helps a level out and this shows that you are an original creator. I applaud you on this part. Not only that, the background decoration I have seen before, but this has some differences that I like that I can't explain because it stands out to me as a different form of the design. The level uses what looks like "glow" in a new and interesting way which helps make the level look really good.
One thing I do need to point out is don't always go for difficult gameplay. Right now, demon levels are hot and they are things that people just keep building. I think that if you have a thematic demon level, and not a color demon level like this, you would do better in the running of this game.
Improvements: Try to create less demons, but if you want to create demons make them thematic and new
Final Score - 68/100 (Decent Level)
This level is a good start for you. This is where you need to begin to develop a new creating style. I see a lot of potential for you, not only in the creating part of the game, but in the player part of the game. Honestly, I don't agree with the Medium Demon you gave, I think it is a step up to a Hard Demon. This is the beginning for what could be something special and I believe that you are on the path to something good and new.
My Rating: 10 Stars (Hard Demon) -