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Post by ardequerade on Sept 18, 2017 3:43:41 GMT -5
hello! this is my first level, it took me so long to make and I want to know what you think about it. id: 37612773 video: www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLiSoV9PP3gsong: Electrodynamix by dj-Nate sorry for the bad recording btw thanks... |
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Clans: Silent Engine (not anymore, left)
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Astral Drifter by Ev4n and more
Hardest Demon: me no like demons
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Post by the rude fag that nobody likes on Sept 18, 2017 15:20:34 GMT -5
Is this a joke or something? |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2017 15:41:55 GMT -5
Is this a joke or something? Nice constructive comment. OT: I may get around to judging this, have been quite busy lately. If any other judge wants to, feel free. |
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Post by horizon on Sept 18, 2017 18:44:29 GMT -5
Is this a joke or something? Well, your username really matches your attitude. :\ |
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Post by ardequerade on Sept 18, 2017 21:12:15 GMT -5
no this is not a joke
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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2017 23:48:43 GMT -5
Gameplay:
There is not that much to say. This gameplay is.. Err.. There are a lot of flaws here which bring the level down, making the general experience unenjoyable.
Example: The first wave part starts out ok, but the triple speed wave portal spam where you have to hold is iffy, as you can't see what pops up and makes the gameplay unpredictable. The effect in itself can be used to make great levels (ref. Exploring Space by Sumsar) and make the gameplay different and unique. However, some parts of the level are ok. For example the 4x speed ball at around 80%. Here you manage to make imo somewhat fun gameplay, at least with the ball.
In short: Flawed, with ok parts. 2/10.
Synchronization:
The sync is below average. Not the best, but far from the worst I've seen. Perhaps the most enjoyable part of the level. 3,5/10.
Decoration:
The deco is actually pretty good for your first level. As I see it, you're actually good for a newbie at making levels. Albeit you seem to have a love for red glow, remove that and get some more of that custom BG work you have done, because that actually looks good for a first level. 4/10.
Extra:
Nothing to say. No points.
Total score: 9,5/30
Now, don't let me bring you down. The level is ok for a first-time creator, but there shouldn't be mercy for anyone. Look at gameplay from people like TamaN and Hinds and see what you can learn. Keep up the good work!
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Post by ardequerade on Sept 19, 2017 1:19:54 GMT -5
Gameplay:There is not that much to say. This gameplay is.. Err.. There are a lot of flaws here which bring the level down, making the general experience unenjoyable. Example: The first wave part starts out ok, but the triple speed wave portal spam where you have to hold is iffy, as you can't see what pops up and makes the gameplay unpredictable. The effect in itself can be used to make great levels (ref. Exploring Space by Sumsar) and make the gameplay different and unique. However, some parts of the level are ok. For example the 4x speed ball at around 80%. Here you manage to make imo somewhat fun gameplay, at least with the ball. In short: Flawed, with ok parts. 2/10. Synchronization:The sync is below average. Not the best, but far from the worst I've seen. Perhaps the most enjoyable part of the level. 3,5/10. Decoration:The deco is actually pretty good for your first level. As I see it, you're actually good for a newbie at making levels. Albeit you seem to have a love for red glow, remove that and get some more of that custom BG work you have done, because that actually looks good for a first level. 4/10. Extra:Nothing to say. No points.
Total score: 9,5/30 Now, don't let me bring you down. The level is ok for a first-time creator, but there shouldn't be mercy for anyone. Look at gameplay from people like TamaN and Hinds and see what you can learn. Keep up the good work! alright, thanks for your criticism and suggestions. i'm sure they will help me improve |
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276 posts
Discord: okno
Clans: Silent Engine (not anymore, left)
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Astral Drifter by Ev4n and more
Hardest Demon: me no like demons
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Post by the rude fag that nobody likes on Sept 19, 2017 1:44:38 GMT -5
Is this a joke or something? Well, your username really matches your attitude. :\ This was just my first tought when I saw it. |
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276 posts
Discord: okno
Clans: Silent Engine (not anymore, left)
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Astral Drifter by Ev4n and more
Hardest Demon: me no like demons
Mini-Profile Background: [img]http://i.imgur.com/UwoWmoQ.jpg[/img]
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Post by the rude fag that nobody likes on Sept 19, 2017 1:48:15 GMT -5
Is this a joke or something? Nice constructive comment. OT: I may get around to judging this, have been quite busy lately. If any other judge wants to, feel free. Thanks man, I appreciate your honest opinion about my nice toughts about this level. I hope, that my comment will constructively help the creator, just like you said. |
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