66 posts
Favorite Level: Sonic wave
Hardest Demon: Xstep V2
Mini-Profile Text Color: Black
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Post by DemoTrilobite on Aug 29, 2017 13:28:37 GMT -5
Hello, I am a new member and I would just like to get my level a bit more out there so people can try my levels, so far I have created 2 levels. The first one is called "Fallen Titans" and it is kind of short. The second one is called "Magnetic Roboss" and I tried to make it a boss fight so I hope you try my levels and tell me if they need improvement. Thank you for taking your time to read this and I hope you have a good day:).
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2017 14:11:40 GMT -5
Welcome! Please read the rules, you can only have 1 level per thread and you need to post the ID.
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66 posts
Favorite Level: Sonic wave
Hardest Demon: Xstep V2
Mini-Profile Text Color: Black
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Post by DemoTrilobite on Aug 30, 2017 7:08:06 GMT -5
I would prefer if you check out my level called "Magnetic roboss" it is my preferred level  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 30, 2017 8:39:21 GMT -5
Post the ID please. but i found it ID:37052130
i made a video
(i'm not going to judge, i cant do constructive criticism)
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66 posts
Favorite Level: Sonic wave
Hardest Demon: Xstep V2
Mini-Profile Text Color: Black
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Post by DemoTrilobite on Aug 30, 2017 10:43:12 GMT -5
Thanks for trying my level I hoped you liked it.  |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2017 4:09:14 GMT -5
DemoTrilobite Next time, please do provide the ID to your level, and you may also only post one level per thread. It is part of the rules here. If you fail to meet these requirements, then I have no choice but to not judge any of your levels.Gameplay - 2/10- This level is not fun. There are plenty of weird and awkward orb timings and there some unnecessary blind jumps at the beginning.
- The coins are literally free. Try and make them harder to get in your next level by putting them in some alternate, harder paths.
- There is no gameplay in the last 15% of the level. It could be easily replaced by an end screen.
- The wave part is pretty much the only non annoying part in the entire level.
- Next time, I suggest you make your gameplay more unique with different portals and speed changers.
Decoration/Block Design - 1/10
- I like the fact that the block design does change a few times throughout the level. I highly encourage this!
- Air decoration is literally non existent in this level. You can find some air decoration objects in the 8th, 9th, and 10th tabs in the level editor.
- The boss layers through a few blocks, this can be fixed by layering him to a different layer compared to the blocks.
- The colours stay the same throughout the level, changing only once throughout the level. This makes your level boring to look at.
- The whole decoration isn't cohesive and looks messy. The block design and decoration should complement each other.
- This video (click here) should be a great help for getting used to the different types of decoration.
Music Sync - 0/10
Final Score - 3/30
Moving to Needs Improvement.
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