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Discord: TSRAnimations (Thea)#1593
Clans: AG (Ascentional Geometricans)
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Hardest Demon: Supersonic by ZenthicAlpha and Mastermind by Hinds
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Post by Thea S. (TSRAnimations) on Aug 19, 2017 8:18:30 GMT -5
This is a Level I had worked on for at least a month. But I have a better looking Level in the Works and I'll be working on it for quite a while  Level Title: Werk Me Level ID: 36623349 Creator: TSRAnimations Verifier: TrueSwoopae Song Title: Werk Me [RmX] by Dj-Nate (ID: 460143) Rating: Insane 8/9* - Medium Demon 10* (I've heard a lot of Easy or Medium Demon from some People on KuBs0n's Discord server, including some People from GDGLE) Cut Recorded Gameplay by me (slightly outdated Version): Let me know what you guys think  Anything from Pros to Cons. |
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Post by DubstepJoltik on Aug 20, 2017 13:07:56 GMT -5
Pre-judging Intro: A plus sign next to the level...I like the look of that.Level Name: Werk Me Creator: TSRanimations, TrueSwoopae [Solo Level w/ Verifier] Level ID: 36623349 Requested Difficulty: Insane 8* ~ Medium Demon 10* Gameplay
General
In some parts, the gameplay is a little bit of a mess. An example of this is the first Cube 1x speed part, where there's some auto parts and some invisible platforms. There's a lot of invisible portals in the level, but the parts that don't have any are pretty smooth and fun. For example, the first Ship part doesn't rely on straight flying for difficulty. I really enjoyed the fast-paced gameplay at the drop. It's not very cancerous.Transitions
The transitions in some parts, like the robot-cube part before the drop, are kinda weird and fast as well considering there's invisible portals there. However, after the drop, it gets a lot better regarding transitions.
Synchronization
I think the level's synchronization with the song is pretty good. The gameplay goes really well with the song, even if it is a little dirty.
Difficulty of Level
An Easy Demon rating would be best for this level. To me, it's about the same difficulty as ShiFt by Motleyorc. There's lots of really fast parts. However, it's not devastatingly hard, as there's some easier sections in the levels.
Decoration
Air Decoration
In some places of the level, like 15% ~ the drop, look kind of empty. I think this is probably because of the low-opacity backgrounds. Also, in 43% ~ 50%, when the decoration is pretty decent, it looks very copy-pasted. Try having some more air decoration in the level to give it less of an emptiness vibe. It's not easy to provide examples for that, but that's what creativity exists for. Try some different air decoration and styles and look for one you like!
Block Designs
The block designs are pretty simple in some places. However, in others, they're really creative and eye-catching. (Side note: I don't like the colors in the top block design at 31% ~ 35%. Blending and non-blending colors don't go well together.) I would like if the designs for the blocks were more creative throughout the entire level rather than at just a few parts. Also, at the robot part after 50%, don't set the lava to "Follow Player Y". It looks kinda weird.Art and Backgrounds
This level's backgrounds are very hard to notice. They're at an opacity so low that I can barely see them. Like I said before, it makes the level feel sort of empty in some places. There isn't much else to elaborate off of this.
Final Thoughts
ScoreGood: 61%/100% - Some parts may feel empty, and some may feel copy-pasted. However, there are some very redeeming moments in the level. If the backgrounds were more noticeable and there was more air decoration in some lacking parts, I'd probably have this on my "Feature-Worthy" standards.
What Can Be Improved?
- Add some more air decoration.
- Make the backgrounds more noticeable.
- Change the colors for the parts that don't look good. (Ex. 31% ~ 35%)
Optional things you could do that might help:- Nerf the level (if you're going for an Insane rating. If you're okay with Demon, then don't worry about this).
- Don't have the lava move on "Follow Player Y".
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Post by meow on Aug 24, 2017 22:44:22 GMT -5
Hello Thea S. (TSRAnimations) ! I am not a level judge at the moment but I would still like too review your level. [My Criteria Consists of Originality 33/100 Design 33/100 and Gameplay 34/100 Now lets get onto the judgement! Originality 33/33
Its hard too say stuff about the originality when its perfect.
Design 25/33
I really like the design because its a gentle design that's easy on your eyes. the background/ground mix is good and its even better because you made it custom. it looks copy and paste but I am never sure. since it looks copy and pasted it brings it down a little bit
Gameplay 22/34
This is okay at gameplay. the only reason its brought down is because its annoying with the invisible orbs and the first dual part. other than that I say its good So overall the level is feature worthy!!! and I rate it  *9 |
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