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Post by slenv123 on Jun 14, 2017 11:31:52 GMT -5
Level Name: Togheter Level Creator: SlenV Level ID: 34850976 Level Difficulty: Hard 5* Level Song and Author: Friends, by Colbreakz and Wubbaduck Collaboration / Solo Level : Solo Level Sorry for laggy video, but my laptop sucks ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ www.youtube.com/watch?v=1gW8L4HtXKY&feature=youtu.be
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Post by traviss1 on Aug 22, 2017 10:20:32 GMT -5
Level Name: Togheter Creator(s): SlenV Level ID: 34850976 Song: Friends Creator(s): ColBreakZ and Wubbaduck Song ID: 720737 Requested Difficulty: 5 Stars (Hard)
Gameplay - 27/33 Let's start from the top shall we? I think the gameplay in this level is pretty cool and unique in lots of places. The use of the wave on the blocks actually was pretty good, the UFO parts and the variety of spider sections really made this level stand out for me. Gameplay is definitely one thing I feel that you have in the books. On top of this, I like the use of the dual portal after the swing copter which felt pretty easy to learn. Another big plus to the gameplay is how many different vehicles you used which makes the player be able to play all or most of the gameplay. Now, there are a couple of things I am not too fond of. For me, the swing copter doesn't fit. It may be that I am not very good at the swing copter, but because of the gravity ball on top it makes me have problems hitting orbs which is why I think this level is slightly harder from what you are asking. I also feel the swing copter part is quite copied and pasted gameplay which is pretty bad. Don't get me wrong, copy and paste isn't bad if you do it right, but don't ever do it with gameplay. The last issue is the sync of this level isn't very good as I feel like there were some areas, like the speed changing cube, that were off. Removal of the swing copter and better music sync could really help this level out.
Design - 19/33 I actually like the block design in this level. For me, it tends to be very unique and really works. I feel as if most sections had a good based block design. Block design in a design level is one of the hardest for a lot of people and tends to be a challenge, but this looked pretty good. On top of this, another good thing I see is that you have one of these color changing to the beat levels. I feel like the design with the color changes are pretty good for the most part throughout this area. However, there are some downsides. To start off, to me the colors seem awfully repetitive in each section. There is nothing unique about them. I think adding some opacity, hue, or even more blending to be quite honest would really help your level out here. Next, I am not too fond of the background and air decoration. The background decoration looks bland and like there is nothing there lots of the time. The air decoration feels quite empty and should have some improvements. Design has flaws such as background and air decoration, and colors should be focused on.
Originality - 19/34 A few things that look original to me are gameplay choices. Some of these gameplay choices such as the use of the swing copter makes for original gameplay. I still think that you need to improve the swing copter for lots of people, but it is a unique addition. Other unique gameplay for me is the spider gameplay which for me really stood out than other spider gameplay, and the duals which I thought where really easy to learn duals which make them quite unique as well. Designs I like include the speed changes and portals which where artistic in some sort of way which for me look amazing, and block designs which really stands out. A few unoriginal things include that this is a constinently color changing level. At this point, I could probably go to the featured page and see 5 of these levels. I am not quite fond of these as I feel like it is becoming a very overused style. The last unoriginal thing I see in this level is the background decoration. The background decoration in this level is very unoriginal and seen thousands of times before. Maybe try finding other background decorations to use instead of the ones you chose in this level. Original level in lots of areas, but unoriginal in what feels like the entire level.
Final Score - 65/100 (65% - Decent) I feel like the biggest thing you should tackle is the design. I don't feel like this is the right style for you and this seems to me an attempt to get on the featured page. These constently color-changing levels are becoming very popular and to me, easy credit to get on the featured board. Now, I do think this level is good, but change the style of the level to maybe a more one color per section level. Also, I don't know if you were trying to spell "Together" in the title because I think Together is misspelled. If so, for future reference, to spell Together is To - Get - Her
My Rating: 6 Stars (Harder) Judged By: Traviss1
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Post by kiriE on Aug 24, 2017 12:25:07 GMT -5
-review- Final Score - 65/100 (65% - Decent) I feel like the biggest thing you should tackle is the design. I don't feel like this is the right style for you and this seems to me an attempt to get on the featured page. These constently color-changing levels are becoming very popular and to me, easy credit to get on the featured board. Now, I do think this level is good, but change the style of the level to maybe a more one color per section level. Also, I don't know if you were trying to spell "Together" in the title because I think Together is misspelled. If so, for future reference, to spell Together is To - Get - Her My Rating: 6 Stars (Harder) Judged By: Traviss1 Ok, so this is a really good review honestly, but I wish you mentioned the messiness and the copy+paste usage in terms of the design. In addition to this, I disagree that the block design was original, it's been used a lot of times before. You also have a bit of writing/lingual mistakes in your review, but this isn't a too big of a problem. This level was very inconsistant to me! Some parts were pretty good, while others were borderline needs improvement... :/ But overall this belongs in decent levels. Approved, moving to decent levels.
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