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Discord: therealpigchefer#4522
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Post by therealpigchefer on Jun 2, 2017 23:42:53 GMT -5
Yay back with another level Level Name: Friends Level Creators: Trippleblastr (publisher), swagPiguis, decorated by PigChefer744 Level ID: 34460930 Level Difficulty: 3-5*? Level Song and Author: Friends by Wubbaduck and Colbreakz Collaboration / Solo Level : Collaboration And I even have a beautiful low quality video: everyplay.com/videos/43706847Don't mind the text at the end indicating that 'I' have no friends irl. I noticed it when it was out and because it wasn't in my profile I couldn't change it back. My son decorated the last part of the level while I was out and he had this brilliant idea to say that he had no friends to garner likes. Ahahahahah I was originally not included in the collab but I volunteered this 12 year old to decorate. This is my first time prioritizing block design and custom backgrounds in a level (that isn't mine). I also tried implementing a story of how friends go in this level. How have I done? -Pig |
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Post by Nightwhisper on Jun 4, 2017 7:55:13 GMT -5
where do I start....(ah sorry if I come out as harsh/hateful, im bad at reviewing and im only doing your part)
first of all, the color combinations are too bright, and they clash with the colors of the foreground/blocks/spikes so I can't tell where they are. the gameplay is very obscured, and I can keep missing the black orb at 12% consistently. at one point, I think around 6%, the background is a layer above the blocks, making it quite difficult to see. I think that the colors could be toned down slightly in opacity, especially in the background, or the actual blocks be a little darker to contrast. the theme is a little confusing, seeing as you put friends, and then blood... but you keep it clear for the most part except for there.
the block design is sometimes the same and boring, other times amazing! the worst part though, was before the first ball, it was just normal blocks. and the first cube was very messy, parts of the blocks were glitched/not the same color where it should be. but after the speed change, you were fairly good with keeping it varied.
also, who made the transitions?
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606 posts
Discord: therealpigchefer#4522
Hardest Demon: xo
Mini-Profile Background: 08d322
Mini-Profile Name Color: c9ffd0
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Post by therealpigchefer on Jun 4, 2017 8:30:09 GMT -5
where do I start....(ah sorry if I come out as harsh/hateful, im bad at reviewing and im only doing your part) first of all, the color combinations are too bright, and they clash with the colors of the foreground/blocks/spikes so I can't tell where they are. the gameplay is very obscured, and I can keep missing the black orb at 12% consistently. at one point, I think around 6%, the background is a layer above the blocks, making it quite difficult to see. I think that the colors could be toned down slightly in opacity, especially in the background, or the actual blocks be a little darker to contrast. the theme is a little confusing, seeing as you put friends, and then blood... but you keep it clear for the most part except for there. the block design is sometimes the same and boring, other times amazing! the worst part though, was before the first ball, it was just normal blocks. and the first cube was very messy, parts of the blocks were glitched/not the same color where it should be. but after the speed change, you were fairly good with keeping it varied. also, who made the transitions? My part is the boss fight, and I decorated the level. SwagPiguis and Tripple made the layout. Yeah, at 6% I couldn't do anything about it. I don't know how to deal with this kind of layering situation :/ That blood part was bricks. It was just red because of bricks. I didn't really understand the first cube situation, can you clarify? And the normal blocks, it was the first cube, right? If so Imma look at it again Were the transitions bad? Because they made the gameplay transition and I just made effects that tried not to hinder your sight of gameplay stuff at transitions. Yea thanks for the points |
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Post by Nightwhisper on Jun 4, 2017 8:48:02 GMT -5
where do I start....(ah sorry if I come out as harsh/hateful, im bad at reviewing and im only doing your part) first of all, the color combinations are too bright, and they clash with the colors of the foreground/blocks/spikes so I can't tell where they are. the gameplay is very obscured, and I can keep missing the black orb at 12% consistently. at one point, I think around 6%, the background is a layer above the blocks, making it quite difficult to see. I think that the colors could be toned down slightly in opacity, especially in the background, or the actual blocks be a little darker to contrast. the theme is a little confusing, seeing as you put friends, and then blood... but you keep it clear for the most part except for there. the block design is sometimes the same and boring, other times amazing! the worst part though, was before the first ball, it was just normal blocks. and the first cube was very messy, parts of the blocks were glitched/not the same color where it should be. but after the speed change, you were fairly good with keeping it varied. also, who made the transitions? My part is the boss fight, and I decorated the level. SwagPiguis and Tripple made the layout.(i never got to the bossfight...) Yeah, at 6% I couldn't do anything about it. I don't know how to deal with this kind of layering situation :/(bugs I guess. blame robtop there I guess)) That blood part was bricks. It was just red because of bricks.(you flash red before the UFO and during it) I didn't really understand the first cube situation, can you clarify? And the normal blocks, it was the first cube, right? If so Imma look at it again(before you transition into the ball, there is a spike that moves that isn't decorated) Were the transitions bad? Because they made the gameplay transition and I just made effects that tried not to hinder your sight of gameplay stuff at transitions.(the ufo transition kills me every time) Yea thanks for the points no problem! |
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606 posts
Discord: therealpigchefer#4522
Hardest Demon: xo
Mini-Profile Background: 08d322
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Post by therealpigchefer on Jun 13, 2017 0:04:46 GMT -5
Okay a week has passed.
Time to tagggg
@repeater13
Tagging because I tried making my level based on his reviews. The hardest part was trying to figure out innovative ways to make block design sync.
Yay
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