226 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Thine Wrath by HDow
Hardest Demon: Triple Flask by Experience D
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Post by 2017tnt on May 6, 2017 10:56:20 GMT -5
Level Name: Hyper Run Level Creator: iIEliteXYZIi Level ID: 33549338 Song: HyperioxX by ParagonX9 Stars Requested: 6-9 Video: everyplay.com/videos/42847260Collaboration/Solo Level: Solo This is my first 2.1 level. Don't feel the need to sugarcoat it, just judge me normally. I would like to know how to be a better creator. |
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Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Ultra Drivers,Identity
Hardest Demon: Metal Crusher
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Post by Threeglassjars on May 10, 2017 12:44:42 GMT -5
Level Styles
0%-8%
Probably my Favorite effect in the level, it looked quite nice and the Gameplay was bearable at very least
5/10
9%-13%
I think this part is one of the worst parts in the level, first Its hard to tell where thing are Going to go and then its hard to adjust yourself to reach the area you are supposed to be going.
2/10
14%-20%
First the background is way too distracting and the camera shaking isn't helping with that. The gameplay suffered from the effects in this part. I would suggest toning down the brightness of the background.
21%-29%
I find that this part is decent but using the monsters instead of spikes is bothering me. Also you don’t need the saw at 24% it bothers me.
4/10
29%-35%
The style looks decent but I’m not a big fan of rainbows in levels so i dislike it. Other than that the gameplay looks good so I’m fine with it
3/10
36%-43%
Swing copter Gameplay with bright flashing lights. At least it turns into regular ball halfway through the part. I’m still now a fan of bright flashing lights so the background is distracting from the gameplay.
4/10
44%-49%
Blast prepossessing memorization V2 please don't make these sections. But the visuals are still bearable.
2/10
50%-55%
easily one of the worst parts of the level. The decoration leeks like vomit. Enough said.
1/10
56%-66%
The Part drags on for way to long, but it looks better them most of the rest of the level, so its ok. I would have thrown in a few cube parts.
4/10
67%-79%
I think the minion’s movements seem too stiff and unpredictable which means that the gameplay suffers a lot, because you can’t tell where anything is going to end up, and they all look way too pixelated (except for the minions from 71% to the end of the part), the gameplay Isn’t anything creative
2/10
80%-83%
Auto
1/10
84%-91%
The same as 67%-79%
2/10
92%-95%
Boring gameplay with rainbows for some reason
3/10
96%-100%
Auto
Overall the level is ok, it’s not the best but not the worst. Overall id rate it easy demon 10 stars
Sorry if I was too harsh
Overall I'd give the level a 5/10sorry if i was too harsh or strict |
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Post by Dragon on May 10, 2017 13:44:04 GMT -5
It's not completely terrible, but here are my points for improvement.
1. Try to keep a more consistent style. It changes too much between an effect level and a traditional level. Also I feel the bossfight was a little forced.
2. Use moving block transitions. This can give your level more flow and improve some of the aspects of the level, including the minion movement and parallax effect.
3. Add some block design. This can make a level look better if done correctly.
Overall, decent, but still needs work.
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226 posts
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Thine Wrath by HDow
Hardest Demon: Triple Flask by Experience D
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Post by 2017tnt on May 10, 2017 15:18:29 GMT -5
Thank you guys for the constructive criticism. I'll take it into account on the level I'm working on.
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Post by traviss1 on Apr 4, 2018 11:51:22 GMT -5
Level Styles
0%-8%
Probably my Favorite effect in the level, it looked quite nice and the Gameplay was bearable at very least
5/10
9%-13%
I think this part is one of the worst parts in the level, first Its hard to tell where thing are Going to go and then its hard to adjust yourself to reach the area you are supposed to be going.
2/10
14%-20%
First the background is way too distracting and the camera shaking isn't helping with that. The gameplay suffered from the effects in this part. I would suggest toning down the brightness of the background.
21%-29%
I find that this part is decent but using the monsters instead of spikes is bothering me. Also you don’t need the saw at 24% it bothers me.
4/10
29%-35%
The style looks decent but I’m not a big fan of rainbows in levels so i dislike it. Other than that the gameplay looks good so I’m fine with it
3/10
36%-43%
Swing copter Gameplay with bright flashing lights. At least it turns into regular ball halfway through the part. I’m still now a fan of bright flashing lights so the background is distracting from the gameplay.
4/10
44%-49%
Blast prepossessing memorization V2 please don't make these sections. But the visuals are still bearable.
2/10
50%-55%
easily one of the worst parts of the level. The decoration leeks like vomit. Enough said.
1/10
56%-66%
The Part drags on for way to long, but it looks better them most of the rest of the level, so its ok. I would have thrown in a few cube parts.
4/10
67%-79%
I think the minion’s movements seem too stiff and unpredictable which means that the gameplay suffers a lot, because you can’t tell where anything is going to end up, and they all look way too pixelated (except for the minions from 71% to the end of the part), the gameplay Isn’t anything creative
2/10
80%-83%
Auto
1/10
84%-91%
The same as 67%-79%
2/10
92%-95%
Boring gameplay with rainbows for some reason
3/10
96%-100%
Auto
Overall the level is ok, it’s not the best but not the worst. Overall id rate it easy demon 10 stars
Sorry if I was too harsh
Overall I'd give the level a 5/10sorry if i was too harsh or strict Nice in-depth break down on this level. It is going to be moved into Needs Improvement because I agree with what you are saying for this level. TIP: Please provide more of an explanation. You break this down into certain percentages which is a great thing, but maybe more of an explanation would be great. |
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