16 posts
Discord: Ryumazaki #0967
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Nemesis
Hardest Demon: Poltergeist
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Post by Ryumazaki on Apr 23, 2017 9:25:01 GMT -5
Level Name: Liberation Creator: Ryumazaki Level ID: 33076631
Suggested Difficulty: Demon 10 stars (Easy-Medium Demon)
Objects: 25,903 Obj.
Level Song: Multex - Gravity Solo level
A level inspired by Retention, ALOT. Level Password: 010205
Heres a video I recently recorded so it can be Judged
The first few segments may look ugly, after that the decoration steps-up alot.
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16 posts
Discord: Ryumazaki #0967
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Nemesis
Hardest Demon: Poltergeist
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Post by Ryumazaki on May 6, 2017 11:01:53 GMT -5
Bump*
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16 posts
Discord: Ryumazaki #0967
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Nemesis
Hardest Demon: Poltergeist
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Post by Ryumazaki on May 21, 2017 13:06:58 GMT -5
Bump, it's almost a month already :/
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16 posts
Discord: Ryumazaki #0967
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Nemesis
Hardest Demon: Poltergeist
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Post by Ryumazaki on Jun 2, 2017 3:16:12 GMT -5
A month has already passed, :l *bump*
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16 posts
Discord: Ryumazaki #0967
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Nemesis
Hardest Demon: Poltergeist
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Post by Ryumazaki on Jul 31, 2017 2:26:43 GMT -5
ANOTHER BUMP, just got a new Desktop and decided to have a record of Liberation. So it can be judged much easier now.
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Post by DubstepJoltik on Aug 3, 2017 7:40:35 GMT -5
Intro: I think people weren't judging it because it didn't have a video. Most people won't judge insanes or demons unless they have a video. But fortunately, you have one, so now I can judge this.
Level Name: Liberation Creator: Ryumazaki Level ID: 33076631 Requested Difficulty: Easy-Medium Demon (10*) Time Spent On This Review: A half-hour -_- Gameplay General
I really like the gameplay. It's just simple, fast-paced action that doesn't involve much spamming or straight flying. It looks like it would be really buggy but it doesn't really seem like it is. Also, this level's ID points to 2.1, but I don't see any 2.1 used in this level whatsoever. No gameplay, no decoration, no spider, no nothing.Transitions
The transitions in this level are pretty smooth. The only one I didn't like was the ship-robot and robot-cube transition before the drop. I like the idea of having a teleporter take you to a new area of gameplay, but it can create bad gameplay in some cases. Also, invisible portals should never be allowed, because it is impossible to see what's going to happen next.Decoration Air Decoration
This level has pretty nice air decoration. The first time, I undershot it by saying this level had fairly simple decoration. Then I looked at it again and realized how wrong I was. It's plastered all over the level in a very cohesive, good-looking way.Block Designs
The block designs certainly aren't perfect, but they still work. There's a good amount of variation between them throughout the level. However, like I said before, they don't have enough memorability to be picked out among other levels with similar block designs. I wish you would've used more 2.1 here.Art and Backgrounds
The backgrounds are pretty simple, so they too work. They're not too distracting and they're not too weak.
Coin Routes
Coin 1 Silver. It's sort of creative to have to wait longer before hitting the jump ring. It's not amazing or anything, but it's still an alright coin.
Coin 2
Coin 3 Rock. I suppose it's a free coin? There's nothing wrong with giving out free coins, though. However, I might just be acting stupid and there might be a way to trigger that coin. But since I didn't see you collect anything in the new video, this stands for now.
Final Thoughts Score72%/100% - It's a pretty good level with lots of hard work and effort put into it. It doesn't deserve to stand next to levels like Impact X and Blade of Justice (Hall of Fame), but it definitely deserves a spot in the Featured tab.
What Can I Improve?- Remove the invisible portals, or make them visible
Optional things you could do that might help:- Add some 2.1 into the level
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44 posts
Favorite Level: Deadlocked
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Post by NeoTheOreo on Aug 3, 2017 11:36:13 GMT -5
Very good. I like it.
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16 posts
Discord: Ryumazaki #0967
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Nemesis
Hardest Demon: Poltergeist
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Post by Ryumazaki on Aug 4, 2017 2:29:13 GMT -5
What Should I Do? - All you have to do is fix the following things:- Get the text at the end to fit the screen
- Remove the invisible portals, or make them visible
- FIX THE WHITE SCREEN/TITLE CARD (before the drop)
Optional things you could do that might help:- Make the pass at the end of the level easier to read
- Add some 2.1 into the level
About the end text and title card, it is only due to because I recorded it at a non-widescreen resolution ( Also because my Monitor isn't widescreen it's 1280x1024, it only bugs on Non-widescreen monitor like so, but it does work on 1366x768. When I do another record there's no thing I can do for the title and end cards, I don't have a widescreen monitor so, yeah. About the coin routes, I'll show it on another video and such with an update and better ver. Also updated video to the updated Noclip run of the level with coin routes.
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Post by DubstepJoltik on Aug 4, 2017 6:37:41 GMT -5
What Should I Do? - All you have to do is fix the following things:- Get the text at the end to fit the screen
- Remove the invisible portals, or make them visible
- FIX THE WHITE SCREEN/TITLE CARD (before the drop)
Optional things you could do that might help:- Make the pass at the end of the level easier to read
- Add some 2.1 into the level
About the end text and title card, it is only due to because I recorded it at a non-widescreen resolution ( Also because my Monitor isn't widescreen it's 1280x1024, it only bugs on Non-widescreen monitor like so, but it does work on 1366x768. When I do another record there's no thing I can do for the title and end cards, I don't have a widescreen monitor so, yeah. About the coin routes, I'll show it on another video and such with an update and better ver. Also updated video to the updated Noclip run of the level with coin routes. Thank you for clearing that up! I updated my review. =D
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