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Post by FacundoC9 on Apr 6, 2017 19:14:28 GMT -5
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Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
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Post by Spadekilla on Apr 6, 2017 20:10:43 GMT -5
Block design - 1.5/10 The block design is really weird at the beginning. It is 3 waves of different shades of pink stacked on each other then copy and pasted on other blocks. You need to put effort and this kind of stuff. Try to make your designs different from each other. But that doesn't mean to make it completely different. Don't make 2 block designs that have different themes. Just make block designs that have different designs but follow the same theme. Then at around like 31% there is blocks, but they don't have any designs in them. I was going to say that to "at least add something" but if you did it would look weird due to the effect. So I don't know what to say about not adding designs in there. Although there is a really weird part at 46%. That effect is really weird for the block, don't do it. I know it is a trick to make you go the correct direction, but that just ruined the look of that block. But then 47% becomes weird because lasers are being used as blocks. Which is alright, but I am used to those being used as another way of spikes. Then 51% we come back to the same block design as the beginning. Then just after that you start recycling other block designs you used before.
Decoration - 2/10 Alright, if I had to describe the decoration in this level in one word. I would say, "Copy and paste". There is nothing wrong with copy and pasting, but it is a problem when you can tell someone is constantly using it and you can tell someone is. Then it just becomes repetitive. The glow is being used way to much. Some of it is used right. But there is some that is reused through out the whole level. Also at the beginning the decoration that is being used as the ground is not very good. Kinda' appears to be 1.9 in a way. The effect at the bottom is used way to much through out the level and the same goes for the clouds. It seems this would've been a better level and previous updates because you used stuff that was popular in like 1.9. 14% we can see you are recycling designs you used already. The thing that rotates around the icon at 14% is alright but there is line that goes straight through because something overlaps. After a while every designs is the same thing just put together differently. But then at 52% something caught my eye. There was a design, the one that looks like spikes that was beside a block. For some random reason, it pulsed green. A pink/purple-ish themed level suddenly has a random object pulse green. Why's that? What ever made it do that should be taken off because it ruined the color combinations. Then after a little while everything is still reusing designs. I did stop to say that 81% has some little effect that a like. It is kinda' overused but at least you used it to make stuff seems different thought out the level.
Game play - 5/10 It is kinda' fun but a little weird. Like in the beginning when you have to jump over a random invisible spike. The only other down side of the game play seems to be that you use a vehicle for to long. That is about it.
Overall, you need to figure out different designs for the level so it can't become to repetitive. Also try not to copy and paste to much to the point when you can tell you did it.
Moved to Decent levels.
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