54 posts
Discord: ✔️[TP] Delvious#7894
Clans: The Pythagoreans, Pokemon Clan (Dunno if it is still active)
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Reanimation By Terron
Hardest Demon: Idk, maybe Deadlocked XD
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Post by (Delvious) DeciduDAB on Apr 2, 2017 18:41:33 GMT -5
Here's a level I've worked on for a while and verifying even longer, and it's my best level yet. If best. please try to rate it harder. Thanks for playing! Level Name: Aquility Creator: Delvious (Me) Level ID: 32036885 Song: The Calling by TheFatRat Difficulty: Harder 7* Video: ,Pls notice moi RubRub! /(:3:)/
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Post by Subzero on Apr 3, 2017 9:03:59 GMT -5
It's ok, but a lot of parts need some decoration, and the background could use some improvement. It's like a 4.5/10.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2017 9:14:58 GMT -5
The gameplay is rather rubbish, filled with invisible portals, orb spams, transitions that are hard to predict and quite a lot of unexpected moving objects. My suggestion is for you to cut down on that, it's hard to play!
This is good for an inexperienced creator but I feel that it's mediocre if you're planning to invest a lot of time into creating. Tell me, how long did this take to make?
Unfortunately, I'll have to be harsh to get my point across - this looks like it was made in 3 days, which isn't exactly a long time. I could compare this level's quality with another level from the Decent Levels section on the forums and this will barely even surpass it. The copy-and-pasted designs, the lack of "Disable Fade In & Out", the clear lack of creativity and the text portals all contribute into making this level "decent-but-not-good-enough". Try experimenting with designs - make something complicated yet easy to do, something that looks incredibly nice. The effects should also be changed to be more dynamic and more "WOW!" than "Oh, this is a sloppily made custom BG... With some lazily placed shake triggers."
Now, there are clear problems with the sync as well - you're either too late, the gameplay just doesn't click or... Well, you're too slow.
That's all the criticism that I have been able to extract by looking at the level as a whole - it was sloppy the entire way, therefore I do not believe that a proper review is required. Unfortunately, I may have been a bit harsh with my wording, so I ask for your forgiveness. (I always go overboard on this.)
I'd give this level a 3.5/10
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54 posts
Discord: ✔️[TP] Delvious#7894
Clans: The Pythagoreans, Pokemon Clan (Dunno if it is still active)
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: Reanimation By Terron
Hardest Demon: Idk, maybe Deadlocked XD
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Post by (Delvious) DeciduDAB on Apr 4, 2017 0:30:08 GMT -5
Alright. To be honest, I'm not a sure major on creating though. Anyways, thanks for the "very honest and well-constructive criticism". I'll try to do better next time I build.
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