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Post by aquatictoast on Apr 1, 2017 18:58:52 GMT -5
Lvl Name: Toast Circles
Lvl Creator: Me, AquaticToast
Lvl ID: 32080132
Auto version ID: 32081852 (For those who don't want to have to beat it to see it).
Difficulty: 7*-8*
This is a solo made level.
Epilepsy Warning- This level is a circles level, which contains lots of flashing lights.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2017 20:20:34 GMT -5
Title: Toast Circles
Creator: aquatictoast
ID: 32080132
Gameplay - 2/10
- The gameplay in this level isn't really good.
- Orb usage is annoying at some parts.
- Tight jumps do not fit in a 7 star level.
- The level is buggy at some parts.
- This is a Nine Circles level.
- At least you variated the obstacles.
- Some parts of the level are reused to make it longer.
- For example, some of the wave parts are copy pasted.
- Not much else to say to be honest.
Decoration + Block Design - 2/10
- The color combos in this level are iffy to say the least.
- The background and the foreground clash in terms of colors.
- Lots of copypasted saws are everywhere in this level
- You could've variated the block design to make your level more unique.
- The green and black saws overlapping each other were unique.
- The art at the end of the level isn't that bad.
- Also it might just be me, but the Fade actually is pretty nice in this level.
- The level looks empty in some parts.
- There isn't much to say about decoration and block design either.
Music Sync- 2/10
- There are lots of missed opportunities for music sync in this level.
- However, the speed portals do sync occasionally.
- Same applies for size portals also.
- But the sync in the ship part is kinda weird sometimes.
- The block design needs to be more involved with the music.
- Maybe make it pulse to the music?
- Dash orbs could've been synced for a better effect.
- The ball part could've been synced better.
Final Score - 6/30.
It's pretty obvious where this belongs (no offense). @jy2000 @fireblizzard thetoxicpig haastregt Approve?
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Post by aquatictoast on Apr 1, 2017 21:45:02 GMT -5
Title: Toast Circles Creator: aquatictoast ID: 32080132 Gameplay - 2/10- The gameplay in this level isn't really good.
- Orb usage is annoying at some parts.
- Tight jumps do not fit in a 7 star level.
- The level is buggy at some parts.
- This is a Nine Circles level.
- At least you variated the obstacles.
- Some parts of the level are reused to make it longer.
- For example, some of the wave parts are copy pasted.
- Not much else to say to be honest.
Decoration + Block Design - 2/10- The color combos in this level are iffy to say the least.
- The background and the foreground clash in terms of colors.
- Lots of copypasted saws are everywhere in this level
- You could've variated the block design to make your level more unique.
- The green and black saws overlapping each other were unique.
- The art at the end of the level isn't that bad.
- Also it might just be me, but the Fade actually is pretty nice in this level.
- The level looks empty in some parts.
- There isn't much to say about decoration and block design either.
Music Sync- 2/10- There are lots of missed opportunities for music sync in this level.
- However, the speed portals do sync occasionally.
- Same applies for size portals also.
- But the sync in the ship part is kinda weird sometimes.
- The block design needs to be more involved with the music.
- Maybe make it pulse to the music?
- Dash orbs could've been synced for a better effect.
- The ball part could've been synced better.
Final Score - 6/30.
It's pretty obvious where this belongs (no offense). @jy2000 @fireblizzard thetoxicpig haastregt Approve?Thanks for the feedback! I'll follow your advice in my next level!  |
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Post by thetoxicpig on Apr 1, 2017 23:31:20 GMT -5
Repeater this review is good but stop making this sound like a bulleted list xD. It really clashes with the punctuation. Also please be consistent in using independent clauses rather than leaving unfinished and awkward ideas.
I'll move it later as I'm on mobile right now, and also need to check the verity of your review.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 2, 2017 0:01:35 GMT -5
Repeater this review is good but stop making this sound like a bulleted list xD. It really clashes with the punctuation. Also please be consistent in using independent clauses rather than leaving unfinished and awkward ideas. I'll move it later as I'm on mobile right now, and also need to check the verity of your review. Well, I'm doing my reviews this way because: 1. It's easier for me. 2. It gets points across easier. |
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Post by thetoxicpig on Apr 2, 2017 0:09:18 GMT -5
Repeater this review is good but stop making this sound like a bulleted list xD. It really clashes with the punctuation. Also please be consistent in using independent clauses rather than leaving unfinished and awkward ideas. I'll move it later as I'm on mobile right now, and also need to check the verity of your review. Well, I'm doing my reviews this way because: 1. It's easier for me. 2. It gets points across easier. At least be consistent in using independent clauses please. Also, it would be nice if you included specific percentages of the level or some sort of indicator as to what portion you're talking about. Also how are you not an actual LJ yet xD |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 2, 2017 0:11:13 GMT -5
Well, I'm doing my reviews this way because: 1. It's easier for me. 2. It gets points across easier. At least be consistent in using independent clauses please . Also, it would be nice if you included specific percentages of the level or some sort of indicator as to what portion you're talking about. Also how are you not an actual LJ yet xDI'll try to, but thanks for the feedback! Ask Kirie that.. 8) |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2017 2:27:42 GMT -5
Welp, I don't really have anything to add. Review Approved.
Moving to Needs Improvement.
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