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Post by fiammetta on Mar 24, 2017 16:16:04 GMT -5
Original animation project, hope it can get star rate :3 Level: Afterparty ID: 31681034 Difficulty: Auto 1* Video - youtu.be/rPW58rzo7tA |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 27, 2017 2:26:25 GMT -5
Title: Afterparty
Creator: fiammetta
ID: 31681034
Gameplay - 0/10
Do I even need to explain?
Decoration + Block Design - 3.5/10
- The "model" moves like a real human (which is good)
- Literally no block design (maybe if it had actual blocks)
- The equalizer blends in well with the background (which is good also)
More shading on the model would've made it more "pixelated"
The ground could be improved for the level to look better
The lights at the top of the screen are a nice touch
The pulse effect at the sides is a very good addition
Also good use of colors!
Music Sync - 4/10
- The lightning flashes go with the music sync!
- At some parts, the model also goes with the music sync.
- The background (excepting the equalizer) could do with some more music sync
The flashing colors at the end of the level could've gone with the music.
Maybe make the music note beat to the music?
The pulse effect goes with the music sync at least.
Final Score - 7.5/40!
Hmm.. maybe this level could be star rated, but according to the score, this level belongs in Needs Improvement. @jy2000
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Post by haastregt on Mar 27, 2017 3:42:30 GMT -5
Well, your review was pretty accurate, but I have some things to notice. The first is that you gave 0/10 for an auto level, but instead of giving 0/10 just dont count it, otherwise it would be unfair Also, I would like to mention that I like the tetris effect on the background. I didnt notice it at first, but it is a small touch making it a bit better. But, another thing repeater didnt mention but is quite important, is that there wasnt alot of variety, the full level had the same background, the same pulses, same deco etc. Only the moves were different. Next time, I suggest changing stuff up a bit every once in a while. Besides those points, repeater did a good job on the review. Due to the gameplay 0/10 score that would be not counted this is going to decent though  |
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