Hello Supernova!
This is my Second review of a level, so hopefully it's alright!
Now, To begin this level is not the best level I have seen at all unfortunately.. But their are good things that stand out though! And to think, this is exactly where i was when i started to create! So whatever I end up rating it, please remember that you will always get better and better as long as you keep trying!
Gameplay. 2/5
The gameplay in this level is not the best I have seen in the world... But one thing I will say, their is not a single part that makes the gameplay turn into an annoying level that no one would want to play. (I will add onto this in the design rating) But in all, the gameplay is not fun, but its not annoying. I would recommend participating in a creator school! Such as SpongeWorld, (This is the one I went to for 4 months) And im sure your gameplay in your next level will be incredible!
Design/Block design. 0.5/5 This is unfortunately the worst part of the level.. But do not fear! Everyone gets better and better as time continues! I saw a lot of block design that was copy and pasted, but I will say one thing, you managed to keep the "Fire/Hell" Themed level! Nice job with that, But continue improving on the design on the blocks. (One thing i would recommend is to look up a tutorial on Youtube on how to use blend!, Such as Etzer, Echonox's tutorial series from a while ago. Or even ask a person like myself with experience in the creating field! I would be happy to help you get better at using blend if needed.)
Originality. 0.5/5
This is nothing new at all, I have actually just searched through the recent levels, and lots of unknown, need inproving creators manage to maintain kinda the same simple, under decorated style. But keep in mind, this does not at all mean that you are a bad creator! Everyone has the potential to be a fantastic creator it just has to be brought out!
Music Sync. 3.5/5
Remember when i said their are good things about this level? Well, this is one of them. I appreciate even though the style was not at all the best i've seen, you still maintained a steady aspect of sync to the song and to the background flashes, and the blocks. Especially at 34% all the way up to 48%. But as always, there are always moment when you need help with things, so keep in mind asking, and searching for Teaching schools can help you improve!
Comments.
I think I touched on pretty much everything I have to say! Keep improving, keep growing, and use the sources that I recommended.
Son finally, the rating in the end. I do not feel like this should be rated, featured, or flamed. But one thing I do know is that when you become a well known creator you will look back at this level and remember how far you have grown!
1.5/10 or 15%
In the "Needs Improvement" Section of the forums
Keep on growing! And can't wait to see you're next project!
