MonoChroma
Stereo Madness
Lonely Player and "Creator"
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Post by MonoChroma on Feb 26, 2017 15:45:45 GMT -5
Hello GD Community!
Since my first level, All in general, Gameplay, Design. Is horrible (Like Stereo Madness)
after a lot of practice and abandoned layouts. I present to you:
Colorful Paradise
ID: 30253975
Level Version: 1
Game Version: 2.1
Requested stars: 3 (Normal)
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Post by Deleted on Mar 29, 2017 3:56:12 GMT -5
Title: Colorful Paradise
Creator: MonoChroma
ID: 30253975
Gameplay - 6/10
- I really like how you used slopes at the last UFO!
- Decent use of orbs to make gameplay.
- More speed changes will make your level more fun.
- The coins could be made better (put in better places?).
- The difficulty in this level isn't really consistent.
- Some parts feel like 2 stars while others feel like 6 stars.
- I also like how you used jump orbs at the neon part!
- The transitions at the neon part could be a little better.
- The beginning could be more unique (not just using spike jumps)
- The auto part could also be replaced.
Decoration + Block Design - 6.5/10
- Right off the bat, I noticed you variated your block design!
- Which is super hard to master (it looks good!)
- I like the custom backgrounds in this level too!
- The backgrounds at the neon part could be improved on.
But the platforms at the neon part do look real and lively!
The moon at the ball part could be improved on.
However the moon creates atmosphere for the ball part.
The color combos are also really good in this level.
The beginning of the level (cube part) could go with a better custom background.
Don't Fade and the Blending used look great here!
Music Sync - 6/10
- The dash orbs at the end could be synced to the music better.
- The sync at the neon part is very good!
- The custom backgrounds could be more involved to the music though.
- Maybe the backgrounds flash whenever the music changes? (like in the first ship)
- The last UFO part was empty when it came to music sync.
- The platforms in this level do adapt with the music almost everywhere.
- Good use of jump pads to make sync (the ball part is an example)
- Like I stated earlier, speed changes are a good way to make gameplay and sync more unique.
Final Score - 18.5/30!
I'm not going to lie when I say this, but I don't believe that this is your first level. Anyway, I think that this level belongs in high Decent - high Good. haastregt @jy2000 Would you like the honors to approve my review?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 29, 2017 18:11:13 GMT -5
I'd say high Decent. It's pretty good, but some spots aren't as detailed and are a little messy.
A few things to add though...
Try adding some more foreground deco in some places, it's pretty empty in a few spots. Some saws, pulsing objects, or blocks would be nice. Also try updating your block designs, a lot of the time it looks very 1.9-ish. You could also just try to make more complex block designs. Other than that, the backgrounds were pretty good, if not the most original, and the gameplay seemed good for the most part, just maybe try to eliminate excess popups.
Moving to Decent.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 29, 2017 23:51:58 GMT -5
I'd say high Decent. It's pretty good, but some spots aren't as detailed and are a little messy. A few things to add though... Try adding some more foreground deco in some places, it's pretty empty in a few spots. Some saws, pulsing objects, or blocks would be nice. Also try updating your block designs, a lot of the time it looks very 1.9-ish. You could also just try to make more complex block designs. Other than that, the backgrounds were pretty good, if not the most original, and the gameplay seemed good for the most part, just maybe try to eliminate excess popups. Moving to Decent. So is my review not approved? |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2017 0:09:35 GMT -5
I'd say high Decent. It's pretty good, but some spots aren't as detailed and are a little messy. A few things to add though... Try adding some more foreground deco in some places, it's pretty empty in a few spots. Some saws, pulsing objects, or blocks would be nice. Also try updating your block designs, a lot of the time it looks very 1.9-ish. You could also just try to make more complex block designs. Other than that, the backgrounds were pretty good, if not the most original, and the gameplay seemed good for the most part, just maybe try to eliminate excess popups. Moving to Decent. So is my review not approved? Forgot to add it xd Yeah it's approved. |
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