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Post by potatolord666 on Feb 7, 2017 8:43:33 GMT -5
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Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 8, 2017 21:19:06 GMT -5
Block design - 4.5/10 It seems like this is a level that uses a lot of 2.1 which isn't really original now that every feature level looks like that. Although most people right now don't like the features. Other then that most of the details you used don't look good. Some have some simple 2.1 blocks but then others look like you tried to do something complex. Such as at 13%. 18% those blocks that seperate both of them don't look good. You should've used the same blocks so it looked better. Or make adjustments to not make it have that "border" or use that as least as possible. 41% is an example of bad block design. Some of your block designs are actually alright such as at 70%. What just seems to be better here are blocks with unique designs instead of blocks spammed with 2.1
Decoration - 3/10 The decoration I see at the beginning is super blank. Really all I see is 2.1 blocks that have a low opacity in the back. Which is alright if you were aiming for a generic 2.1 level. It seems like you focused more on block designs then decoration. I see some slopes. But it took a while to realize those. 20% looks really bad because of layering and color combinations. The layering is bad because some blocks go over the dragons and fires but some don't and that looks really bad. Also just the white and red on the flames look bad. 33% was in need of decoration as it is just filled with saws. Using a lot of saws don't look good ,that is if you are trying to copy "Drake Cormier's" levels. Also those laser things that you make hold spikes don't look good.
Game play - 5/10 It's pretty good. It has some nice sync to. The only problem seems to be that you use the dash orb for to long sometimes.
Overall, it seems like you need to improve on these things listed. Decoration, block design, and layering. Once you greatly improve on these you could have a rated or featured level!
Moved to decent levels.
(keep in mind it barely made it to decent. It is pretty much in the middle of needs improvement and decent.)
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Post by potatolord666 on Feb 9, 2017 6:24:19 GMT -5
thanks for your informations i will try to implement what u said in future levels
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