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Post by motus on Feb 5, 2017 9:42:08 GMT -5
Hello ! I am Motus and this is my new level ! I spent a lot of time to create this level and i'd like some good advices and constructive criticism  Name : Hotot Creator : Motus ID : 29279767 Difficulty : Hard 5 stars Music : Happy_ by Larrynachos (Song ID : 699166) Tip : Pay attention to the rythm of the music Thanks ! |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 18, 2017 20:39:14 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2017 0:47:50 GMT -5
Since no one's going to review this, I may as well just do it myself.
Title: Hotot
Creator: motus
ID: 29279767
Song: HAPPY by LarryNachos
Gameplay - 4/10
The gameplay in this level really likes to pop out in your face. Leading to the first cube part, there are already examples of this, and most of the gameplay here is just using orbs. I would really like to see you use more use of platforms in your levels, as overusing orbs are not fun. The second part is a bit better, as speed changes are implemented here, but there is still orb overusage (even the 2.1 dash orbs). The ball transition is not fun, and there is almost no chance to react, but at least you used platforms here. The robot part is decent, but it could be improved with more variety. The ship part actually has a good transition, with the yellow pad, but the size changes can throw some people off guard, as well as the teleporting after it. The third cube part uses more orbs, but at least there is another good transition. The upcoming parts are the best part of the level when it comes to gameplay, as they put you on your feet, although the UFO part could be a bit better as well as the cube part after it, with the transition. The second ship part is a good change of pace from the rest of the level, but the gameplay here is boring (the coin is annoying to get), and can be improved with variation between orbs (there is a difference between orb overusage and orb variation). The ball part after it is a bit buggy with the orbs, as I experienced while recording the video for this level, but it's nothing too bad (the black orbs were a unique thing as well). The cube transition can be improved as well, as well as the part with using the dash orb after the cloud bounces you up, and like half of the other parts in this level, can be variated with platforms. The robot coin isn't too bad, but it can be annoying to get.
Decoration + Block Design - 3/10
There are lots of copy pasted things in this level. Starting off with the cube part, I can see lots of copy pasted saws with the same design, and the colors with the block design aren't really good either, and the pink flashes don't go well on the level. The red and yellow on the black for the block design looks better than the yellow and black on white, but still room for improvement. There is less use of copypaste here, but there are still some examples. The ball part has the copypasted saws this time, but at least the heart is an unique touch. The robot part has lots of copypaste saws and clouds as well, but at least it's mixed up with the saw with a face on it, and I also like the way it looks at you as you jump over it. The yellow and black on white block design is back here as well (not to mention the copypaste saws) for the ship part, and the saw with a face on it is back here too, it was fine if it was used once, but more than once can get tedious. The finger arrows were a nice thing to add, but maybe change the colour of them. The way the block design flashes pink was a improvement from the rest of the level. The cube, robot, ball, and UFO parts have copypasted saws again, and there are 0 signs of block design. The ship part brings us something original, but the pink and brown colours do not go together in my eyes, not to mention the copypasted saws. The rest of the level has copypasted saws (the pink block design in the ball part was not bad, but could be improved), but the pink glow could be fixed. The rainbow block design is the best block design in the level in my opinion. Try not to copypaste things in your future levels, as it can be annoying.
Music Sync - 4/10
The music sync here isn't too bad, but as always, could be improved on. The one good thing about overusing orbs is that they are a option for making music sync, and you used it for that purpose in this level. That pretty much sums up my thoughts on the first 2 cube parts. The ball part provides music sync by using a pink pad, which is also a way to make music sync, not to mention there are orbs here as well. The robot part has 0 music sync (as far as I know), sadly.. but the decoration and the block design in the ship part was flashing with the music. For the next cube, pads and orbs were used to make music sync. I noticed in the ball part, that I tapped as soon as the music changed, which is a unique sign of music sync in this level. The transition also syncs with the music, so that's a plus. The ship part also has 0 signs of music sync. The ball part uses orbs to make sync, which is honestly starting to get overused. The cube part syncs with the music as well, with the taps, but also uses orbs to make music sync. That's all I have to say about music sync in this level.
Overall Rating - 11/30 (36%)
To be honest, I say this belongs in Needs Improvement, but I do have one recommendation for you, and that is to join a creator school called Aether (there are classes about everything a good creator needs to know) You do need Discord though, but if you click on this, you can join!
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Post by kiriE on Feb 20, 2017 4:47:12 GMT -5
Since no one's going to review this, I may as well just do it myself.
Title: Hotot
Creator: motus
ID: 29279767
Song: HAPPY by LarryNachos
(...Long Review...)
Overall Rating - 11/30 (36%)
To be honest, I say this belongs in Needs Improvement (...)
Approved, moving to NEEDS IMPROVEMENT LEVELS. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2017 4:56:59 GMT -5
Since no one's going to review this, I may as well just do it myself.
Title: Hotot
Creator: motus
ID: 29279767
Song: HAPPY by LarryNachos
(...Long Review...)
Overall Rating - 11/30 (36%)
To be honest, I say this belongs in Needs Improvement (...)
Approved, moving to NEEDS IMPROVEMENT LEVELS. Sorry about that Aether thing.. |
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Post by motus on Feb 21, 2017 7:43:01 GMT -5
Since no one's going to review this, I may as well just do it myself.
Title: Hotot
Creator: motus
ID: 29279767
Song: HAPPY by LarryNachos
( review)
Thanks for your review ! I will take account of your advices !!  |
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