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Post by 6359_ on Feb 4, 2017 3:26:31 GMT -5
It has been a while since I posted here...
Anyway, play my new nivel 29195797
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 5, 2017 9:48:49 GMT -5
Block Design - 3/10
Yes, I do know that this is a remake of Machina off of Geometry Dash World ,but c'mon add some block design to this stuff. The beginning is just plain blocks. If it had something inside the blocks it could have been better. Take a look at Neptune's "V2' series. He edits the game play a little but keeps the theme and song. But! He also adds some decoration to it too. A better example is Airswipe's remakes of levels like Silentfunk. If this level had block design that had the same "black sync" effect to it it could have been really good!
Decoration - 4.5/10
Once again I know you were following the Machina theme. Add some decoration though. If this had that "Anthrax style" to it with that same "black sync" effect to it that would've been a masterpiece. It's like you really followed the Machina theme. I did see at the ship part that it did get more decoration to it but it is still in need of more. If it had more of those "trail" decoration you put on the surface of blocks that could have been better then making it blank. At the boss fight it did have a nice custom background. I thought this was going to be those kinds of levels were it goes from simple to complex (like Utopian Delusions by Narday) and turns out I was wrong but also right. Because the beginning had very little decoration but the ending had more than the beginning ,but the decoration at the ending wasn't complex so yeah.
Game play - 5/10
The game play has very nice sync to the song. Although it does get a little boring when you made a vehicle last for to long (like the first ball part). That's all I really got to say about the game play.
Your score is 12.5/30
Overall, it seems like you really need to understand that you shouldn't follow a theme to much and a little "spice" in it.
I was stuck on if I should move this to decent or needs improvements. Then again I judge levels by how they look. You did follow the theme way to much soo...
Moved to Decent levels.
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Post by 6359_ on Feb 5, 2017 10:02:25 GMT -5
aw fine
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Post by perrito triste on Feb 5, 2017 10:14:14 GMT -5
Block Design - 3/10 Yes, I do know that this is a remake of Machina off of Geometry Dash World ,but c'mon add some block design to this stuff. The beginning is just plain blocks. If it had something inside the blocks it could have been better. Take a look at Neptune's "V2' series. He edits the game play a little but keeps the theme and song. But! He also adds some decoration to it too. A better example is Airswipe's remakes of levels like Silentfunk. If this level had block design that had the same "black sync" effect to it it could have been really good! Decoration - 4.5/10 Once again I know you were following the Machina theme. Add some decoration though. If this had that "Anthrax style" to it with that same "black sync" effect to it that would've been a masterpiece. It's like you really followed the Machina theme. I did see at the ship part that it did get more decoration to it but it is still in need of more. If it had more of those "trail" decoration you put on the surface of blocks that could have been better then making it blank. At the boss fight it did have a nice custom background. I thought this was going to be those kinds of levels were it goes from simple to complex (like Utopian Delusions by Narday) and turns out I was wrong but also right. Because the beginning had very little decoration but the ending had more than the beginning ,but the decoration at the ending wasn't complex so yeah. Game play - 5/10 The game play has very nice sync to the song. Although it does get a little boring when you made a vehicle last for to long (like the first ball part). That's all I really got to say about the game play. Your score is 12.5/30 Overall, it seems like you really need to understand that you shouldn't follow a theme to much and a little "spice" in it. I was stuck on if I should move this to decent or needs improvements. Then again I judge levels by how they look. You did follow the theme way to much soo... Moved to Decent levels.  |
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 5, 2017 10:17:47 GMT -5
Block Design - 3/10 Yes, I do know that this is a remake of Machina off of Geometry Dash World ,but c'mon add some block design to this stuff. The beginning is just plain blocks. If it had something inside the blocks it could have been better. Take a look at Neptune's "V2' series. He edits the game play a little but keeps the theme and song. But! He also adds some decoration to it too. A better example is Airswipe's remakes of levels like Silentfunk. If this level had block design that had the same "black sync" effect to it it could have been really good! Decoration - 4.5/10 Once again I know you were following the Machina theme. Add some decoration though. If this had that "Anthrax style" to it with that same "black sync" effect to it that would've been a masterpiece. It's like you really followed the Machina theme. I did see at the ship part that it did get more decoration to it but it is still in need of more. If it had more of those "trail" decoration you put on the surface of blocks that could have been better then making it blank. At the boss fight it did have a nice custom background. I thought this was going to be those kinds of levels were it goes from simple to complex (like Utopian Delusions by Narday) and turns out I was wrong but also right. Because the beginning had very little decoration but the ending had more than the beginning ,but the decoration at the ending wasn't complex so yeah. Game play - 5/10 The game play has very nice sync to the song. Although it does get a little boring when you made a vehicle last for to long (like the first ball part). That's all I really got to say about the game play. Your score is 12.5/30 Overall, it seems like you really need to understand that you shouldn't follow a theme to much and a little "spice" in it. I was stuck on if I should move this to decent or needs improvements. Then again I judge levels by how they look. You did follow the theme way to much soo... Moved to Decent levels. I'm confused. |
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Post by Left the forums for good :DD on Feb 5, 2017 12:18:57 GMT -5
Machina is an overused song.
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Post by 6359_ on Feb 5, 2017 12:55:17 GMT -5
Machina is an overused song. Too bad! |
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Post by VegetarianBacon on Feb 5, 2017 13:30:16 GMT -5
Block Design - 3/10 Yes, I do know that this is a remake of Machina off of Geometry Dash World ,but c'mon add some block design to this stuff. The beginning is just plain blocks. If it had something inside the blocks it could have been better. Take a look at Neptune's "V2' series. He edits the game play a little but keeps the theme and song. But! He also adds some decoration to it too. A better example is Airswipe's remakes of levels like Silentfunk. If this level had block design that had the same "black sync" effect to it it could have been really good! Decoration - 4.5/10 Once again I know you were following the Machina theme. Add some decoration though. If this had that "Anthrax style" to it with that same "black sync" effect to it that would've been a masterpiece. It's like you really followed the Machina theme. I did see at the ship part that it did get more decoration to it but it is still in need of more. If it had more of those "trail" decoration you put on the surface of blocks that could have been better then making it blank. At the boss fight it did have a nice custom background. I thought this was going to be those kinds of levels were it goes from simple to complex (like Utopian Delusions by Narday) and turns out I was wrong but also right. Because the beginning had very little decoration but the ending had more than the beginning ,but the decoration at the ending wasn't complex so yeah. Game play - 5/10 The game play has very nice sync to the song. Although it does get a little boring when you made a vehicle last for to long (like the first ball part). That's all I really got to say about the game play. Your score is 12.5/30 Overall, it seems like you really need to understand that you shouldn't follow a theme to much and a little "spice" in it. I was stuck on if I should move this to decent or needs improvements. Then again I judge levels by how they look. You did follow the theme way to much soo... Moved to Decent levels. Your review is unfair and has been reported. Since when are you a judge of how level judges should judge levels? His review is fair and honest. You have no role in his decision. |
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 5, 2017 14:09:09 GMT -5
Since when are you a judge of how level judges should judge levels? His review is fair and honest. You have no role in his decision.  This better be a joke. If not, you are just kissing Twoot's ass because "she" (I think) is well known. I gave her a review the way I review any level. In the end it was decent. Now if you can't take any stuff like this then you should just turn off your pc. |
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 5, 2017 14:10:39 GMT -5
Machina is an overused song. She was making a Machina V2 why wouldn't she use that song? That's like making a Stereo Madness V2 using the back on track song. |
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Post by Left the forums for good :DD on Feb 5, 2017 20:06:06 GMT -5
Machina is an overused song. She was making a Machina V2 why wouldn't she use that song? That's like making a Stereo Madness V2 using the back on track song. I was just saying lol :v plz no hate ;3; |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2017 2:57:19 GMT -5
wtf happened to the thread
can you guys pls get on topic again?
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Post by 6359_ on Feb 6, 2017 14:17:01 GMT -5
oh it got featured 4th place
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 6, 2017 15:51:08 GMT -5
oh it got featured 4th place Nice job! But that isn't going to change my thoughts on this level if you thought it would. |
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Post by 6359_ on Feb 6, 2017 16:14:26 GMT -5
oh it got featured 4th place Nice job! But that isn't going to change my thoughts on this level if you thought it would. Actually, it means you should move the thread |
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