[ti]Hard[/ti]Jumper 2017, by PaidDemon [Youtube-Video] {5*}

Hey Man, Cool Level!

Difficulty: 6*

Pre-reviewing notes: This level needs some major, major detail improvements. The gameplay reminds me of map packs, where there wasn't any "generic" stuff, which in my case, is a plus. I am going to do a short review, but if you want, I can pick apart your level very meticulously and get every last detail. This is supposed to be a jumper remake, but it doesn't remind me of jumper at all.

Gameplay: Your gameplay is pretty good and consistent throughout the entire level - good music sync, good overall gameplay. Your first coin makes no sense to me though - coins should be more challenging to get, and that isn't one of them. The 25% transition needs to change. You have to memorize to hold down, and almost immediately release. My rule of thumb is that if it is below an 8* level, a player should be able to beat it without having to memorize too much. Don't make all of the spikes invisible for a really long time, it makes it weird to have to remember where all of them are. 50% transition needs to be changed.as you have to press as soon as you hit the ground. At 69%, the ship is not good gameplay. You can lie on the ground, and not get killed. The wave part is a little annoying, and has another bad transition. Cool idea with the invisible spikes in-between the real ones - that would have killed me for sure.

Design: This is where you need help. I'm will grade you very, very easily on this, as you wanted it to be nostalgic. Most of the design of is nostalgic, but it isn't a good nostalgic. I think a good nostalgic should have some 2.0 elements to mix it up a bit. Change the color of your background more often. Change it where the notes of the song change drastically, or whenever a new track is added. In this case, you should put one at 11%. Also, change the ground color to match nicely with your background. It shouldn't be the same color, slightly different, but it should still change with the level. Most of your designs look randomly placed and overused. Take for instance, the green spike deco on the block first seen at 5%. The deco is copy-pasted throughout the entire level, and used way too much. You do that with a ton of deco and items including: sawblades, rotating decorations, and the spikes you see in the ship part. Also, stick to one style. You should use pretty much 2 types of blocks, and 2 types of spikes throughout the entire level. At 78%, you have 3 different types of spikes.Also at the wave part, the 2.1 deco is placed terribly. I recommend changing it to flow with the level. There is also little to no block design in this level. It is all just blocks from the editor. Please fix, as the block design shows a huge part of the creators originality and overall design.

Final Score: I would put this in Needs Improvement. This level needs to be redecorated, and refurbished to become a good level.

Level has been updated!
I recplaced coins and made the gameplay easier.
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Would somebody help me improving my level?
Need someone with experience and tons of well-known levels...

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