28 posts
Discord: Muffy450#4505
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: BuTiTi II
Hardest Demon: ICE Carbon Diablo X 100%/Sonic Wave 75%
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Post by Muffy450 on Jan 29, 2017 16:06:22 GMT -5
Level Name: Surface Level Creator: Muffy450 Level ID: 28974882 Level Difficulty: Hard 5* Level Song and Author: Surface by Dimrain47 Collaboration / Solo Level : Solo Level Video:
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221 posts
Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Jan 30, 2017 11:36:44 GMT -5
0% - 15% Block Design - 1/10 It seems to be the same copy and pasted block for all of them. The only good thing is that it has movement. It isn't anything special or amazing. Try making a variation of designs for all blocks that have some design that actually looks good. Slopes is something good to use to make good block designs.
Decoration - 1/10 Ehmm, First off try not to use "copy and paste" to much. Because the clouds are obviously copy and pasted. The platforms in the background could have been better if you added some decoration inside of it.
Note : Sync never really bothers me in levels but the sync of this level to the song is really bothering me and it is just the beginning of the level.
16% - 31% Block Design - 2.5/10 This block design is still better then the last one but it still isn't really good. I do not know how to explain why I don't really like it.
Decoration - 1/10 It wasn't a good idea to use the spikes with twigs on there. It doesn't really go well. The glowing objects you put on the blocks are alright but it isn't good when you didn't use the corner pieces. Also it is really blank and it could use some decoration.
Note : The game play is super boring atleast change from reverse and mini ship from time to time to make it entertaining.
32% - 41% Block Design - 3/10 This block design is way better than the ones that were used in the previous blocks. It is still kind of blank.
Decoration - 1/10 I actually don't see any decoration. Well, I do see those platforms in the background that move a little but c'mon you need something more then that.
Note : Why did you suddenly change the difficulty? At first it was like a 2 star level then it turned to like a 8 star level.
42% - 55% Block Design - 1/10 It isn't good. Due to the decoration also being just as bad as the block design making this part really bad. Then it gets worse when it turns into the color of your primary color. Like c'mon that just messed up the color combination really badly.
Decoration - 1/10 The idea of adding a that color of glow to the pads and orbs isn't a good idea because it ruins the color combination of the level. Also the other decoration used seems to just copy and paste the same pulse objects.
56% - 67% Block Design - 1/10 You need to make really good block design. Don't use plain black blocks as they don't look good.
Decoration - 1/10 Well on this spider part there is literally no decoration.
67% - 100% This ending is exactly the same as the beginning. Just with different game play.
Overall, you need to severely boost your skills at block design, decoration, game play, sync, and color combinations. If you learn how to properly do all of that you would most likely get a rated or featured level.
Moved to Needs Improvements.
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28 posts
Discord: Muffy450#4505
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: BuTiTi II
Hardest Demon: ICE Carbon Diablo X 100%/Sonic Wave 75%
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Post by Muffy450 on Jan 30, 2017 14:14:52 GMT -5
well, i tried, thanks...
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