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Discord: Muffy450#4505
Creator Points: 0
Favorite Level: BuTiTi II
Hardest Demon: ICE Carbon Diablo X 100%/Sonic Wave 75%
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Post by Muffy450 on Jan 26, 2017 19:31:00 GMT -5
Level Name: Moonstone Level Creator: Muffy450 Level ID: 28799008 Level Difficulty: Hard 5* Level Song and Author: Moonstone by DJVI Collaboration / Solo Level : Solo Level Description: Its just a 2.1 level... that isn't another level... its my best level! Video: (Spoiler)
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Discord: Spadekilla#1895
Clans: Core
Favorite Level: Utopian Delusions by Narday
Hardest Demon: Ultra Drivers, I Said Baaah
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Post by Spadekilla on Feb 17, 2017 20:19:48 GMT -5
Block design - 1.5/10 It is really weird. Don't use platform blocks with out anything under or above it or else it would look weird. Such as at 19%. 27% is also weird. The placement of the block has some weird positions. It also doesn't look good because it is some simple design that is to blank. 35% looks better but once you got a hold of block design you didn't use to many blocks. The blocks you used for 51% is not good for a simple design. It is only good for complex designs. 76% is also weird because every object has the same color and you can barely see any of it. Your problem seems to be knowing what blocks and colors to use.
Decoration - 1/10 It needs quite some improvement . The clouds are weird because of were they are placed. Those "x" glow things look weird also because of were they are placed and just the way they look. After the first cube the only deco I see at the ship is transparent black platforms slowly moving. 36% is in need of decoration because it is really blank. If I do see some decoration it is something that has a bad color combination to the blocks. Tip, purple and yellow don't go together. 50% also really needs decoration because of the weird block design. Also just because it doesn't have any. Same fore the dual at 57%. The spider isn't good because of what I mentioned at the block design. Sense every block has the same color it looks weird. 87% looks weird because all it has is lines that make for 'decoration". If it had great block design here then I would understand why you used those lines as decoration ,but then I realize there is no blocks.
Game play - 2/10 There is some weird wave parts such as at 84% and 48%. It is also very boring such as the dual. The spider is alright but could be better if you rapidly changed vehicles that synced to the song.
Overall, you seem to struggle with game play, decoration, color combinations, and block design. If you greatly improve on these then you could get a rated level.
Moved to Needs Improvement.
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Post by kiriE on Feb 20, 2017 15:40:38 GMT -5
Block design - 1.5/10 It is really weird. Don't use platform blocks with out anything under or above it or else it would look weird. Such as at 19%. 27% is also weird. The placement of the block has some weird positions. It also doesn't look good because it is some simple design that is to blank. 35% looks better but once you got a hold of block design you didn't use to many blocks. The blocks you used for 51% is not good for a simple design. It is only good for complex designs. 76% is also weird because every object has the same color and you can barely see any of it. Your problem seems to be knowing what blocks and colors to use. Decoration - 1/10 It needs quite some improvement . The clouds are weird because of were they are placed. Those "x" glow things look weird also because of were they are placed and just the way they look. After the first cube the only deco I see at the ship is transparent black platforms slowly moving. 36% is in need of decoration because it is really blank. If I do see some decoration it is something that has a bad color combination to the blocks. Tip, purple and yellow don't go together. 50% also really needs decoration because of the weird block design. Also just because it doesn't have any. Same fore the dual at 57%. The spider isn't good because of what I mentioned at the block design. Sense every block has the same color it looks weird. 87% looks weird because all it has is lines that make for 'decoration". If it had great block design here then I would understand why you used those lines as decoration ,but then I realize there is no blocks. Game play - 2/10 There is some weird wave parts such as at 84% and 48%. It is also very boring such as the dual. The spider is alright but could be better if you rapidly changed vehicles that synced to the song. Overall, you seem to struggle with game play, decoration, color combinations, and block design. If you greatly improve on these then you could get a rated level. Moved to Needs Improvement. Spadekilla, the levels you were reviewing for the level judge test was NOT supposed to be moved. Moving this back to the judging panel again
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